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Power Corrupts: Dirty Dealings (ch. 44)

🕑 Added 2020-09-05 14:54:57 +0000 UTC

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RiZan

Its all about whats good Narrative wise and what you have knowledge for. After doing already two Fantasy setting (Danmachi & Skyrim) to jump to another Fantasy in tone can get cumbersome. There are other genres to go to as well like MHA/DxD/Jojo/Black Lagoon for the Modern world with action or FMA/Girl Genius/Assassins Creed/Avatar : TLA/Valkyrie Chronicles for Historical Settings for craft skills.

Evan Crooks

Campione would be a nice place Id think, use it to get Hestia back some of her divinity maybe?

Fasd

That turn, Holy Shit. I agree with Lance, he does need a bit of a challenge, but not Bleach, they are gods there, Little G not Big like in Marvel, and they are intangible, we don't know if we can fight ghost. As much as I hate where they have gone in the last few arcs I think a good place to go would be RWBY, if you are taking suggestions.

UnlimitedLikes

Konosuba!!!!

BruhBruhBear

High School of the dead? Uhhhh that won't mesh well I think. His power would be wayyyyyyyy too much to hold my interest. It would just be smut / killing zombies

Lightseid

Please do not go to Dragon Age. I would lose all interest for this story. So please don't. Konosuba and Mass Effect are OK I guess, mostly because it would be you writting them, otherwise most authors I have found can't make them very interesting. And going to High School of the Dead is kind of risky, I have seen plenty of story die in that setting because there is nothing to do there, except kill zombies and collect basic human waifus with nothing special to them, if not for their beauty. There is plenty of beautiful women in settings that are much more interesting. I would love to see you take on Star Wars, Avatar : TLA, FMA, Overlord, Fate (Zero, Stay Night, Grand Order), High School DxD, Worm, Bleach, Marvel (since you already have two DC stories going), or Warhammer 40K. Personally I think any story you write in those settings would be even more interesting.

Enjou

My guess here is that Jericho is about to skip a step and become Jarl of Falkreath, not just temporarily take charge. The Jarl is dead and without an heir apparent. His uncle is dead, and also without an heir apparent. The people need someone who can solve their problems, and Jericho has proven he's a problem solver and has promised to fix the food situation for the people, which means he'll have their support. He won't need to get another Jarl's approval to make a Hold of Helgen. The Jarl of Whiterun was already willing to give it up. He can probably just trade some land to hide the real reason for it (maybe put that barrow in Whiterun's lands for Helgen, making the borders canonical, lol), or Balgruuf can just justify it by not wanting to deal with having Divine Hestia's familia based in his lands. Jericho can put in a capable steward while he's off adventuring, and probably just move the capital of the hold to Helgen since it's growing.

IG884HIRE

What a dick, but damn, that old man's death is gonna be one of those "haunt you in the wee hours of the morning" type of things, isn't it? Nice to see Aela join up too.

Razorfloss razor

He's about to take charge until a successor is picked isn't he. As for other worlds since Jericho is already physical strong give him something he can't puch to solve. It's the same reason why Luther is one of supes greatest foes. He has polical power vs supes physical power

Silverxy96

I like the pokemon idea but as jesse robbins said you are the author and is better for you to use what you would like to write. Oh and as always a fantastic chapter 😁

marids

If you wanted to switch up the story from serious and gory to lighthearted and comedic then sure, Konosuba would work. But Dragon Age works well precisely because of how similar it is to Skyrim, since it allows the other characters from Skyrim that would be doubtlessly brought along to acclimate to the dimension-hopping process with more ease due to their first transition being a similar world to their original, compared to the shock of coming to a world that seems to operate on LN and Anime tropes. That and it finishes off the serious stuff to make way for Konosuba and Mass Effect after to enjoy the shift in tone more fully. The way I see it: Skyrim (OP Problem Solver + Growth), Dragon Age (Dank World Saving + New Blood's First Rodeo), Konosuba (Fluffy Vacation + Catch All Waifus), Mass Effect (Zombie-Alien-Robot Movie + Magical Hilarity in SciFi) Essentially I don't think it's a good idea to let waifu characters that comes from a lighthearted world such as Darkness or Megumin face the disgusting gory details in DA. Instead that world should be like a vacation spot to spend some time in to relax after the serious stuff are done already.

Wednesday's Jest

I can see why you would think Dragon Age would be much the same as Skyrim, but I wonder how much of that is because you plan to have Jericho act the same? There is little that is going to physically challenge him in DA, especially once he is done with Skyrim, but there are more than just physical challenges that he can face. One of the things that forced his path in DanMachi is his limited political experienced and ability. Without the prowess to force the Gods to condemn Soma he was forced into the War Game, but if he had the knowledge and practice with social manipulation that he does with physical combat, then he might have been able to resolve that situation with far less fallout. If you want him to go to DA, then why not have him face a political challenge? Make it so that just hitting it with a sword won't actually solve the problem in a way that Jericho is willing to accept. This removes any similarity to Skyrim where he seems to be more than able to accomplish a political end through physical means and you can use the similarities between the two settings to highlight the differences. Rather than feel sameish it becomes an excellent way to show his growth as a character as we see superficially similar events play out in new ways. Then you can take him to Mass Effect where he will need both his absurd physical prowess, but also his newfound political savvy, to help Shepard build the kind of coalition that can stand up to the Reapers. Doubly so if the Crucible is a trap instead of a Deus ex Machina. At the end of the day, however, write what you find exciting to write. An author who is just going through the motions tends to kill the excitement of the story. Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to more.

Lance Green

My recommendation is for him to actually go to a world that can challenge him, and give him time to train himself up for a really heavy hitter world. The challenging training world I'd recommend is pokemon, and while media shows it's largely a safe world, the feats that different pokemon can do and the stuff you can learn there are astounding. Like a machamp will out power jericho with one hand at this point. Learning aura would be a great boon and big advantage. Then the next world after training could be bleach or marvel or something along those lines of power. But that's just my opinion and thoughts on where he should be going next. I love the story and can't wait to continue.


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