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Monthly Prompt: Briefing (Big Tipper-Biggest Tipper Early Release)

🕑 Added 2020-09-25 16:46:24 +0000 UTC

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Eldar Zecore

That’s a fair point, and a lesson to us to be a tad more careful with our prompt requests in the future.

IdeasGuy

Yeah, that's pretty much the issue I had writing it. The how and why are both spoilers and reserved for the actual story, which just left the who. So, I couldn't really write it how I wanted to. But, it was a lessoned learned to not take prompts that run a little too close to my plans.

Eldar Zecore

While I did enjoy the reactions of the JL, I feel that this acts to much as a "Part 1" rather than a stand alone. To be honest I thought that this was going to be a more of them discussing "How" to handle Tarble, rather than "what" they were dealing with. Like, I thought Omake would involve them discussing possible weaknesses, Hal's personal experience fighting Tarble, allies that they could try and bring to bear, or even a way to try to persuade Tarble to leave the Earth alone or something. As far as Omakes go it was fine, but I came in expecting something else.

gin

This is supposed to be a briefing, but instead reads like praise. Prince Tarble is so strong and handsome and smart. He killed a few billion people by the way. He knows so many techniques and all planes under his rule prosper, after he kills the natives. And he has such a tragic childhood.

LandWhale

Yeah, this is easily my favourite, with power corrupts as a close second

Anthony Maxwell

Personally I think this is the best one out of all three of your fanfics.

Antares

This fic is only strange for me, I enjoy reading it even if it’s my least favourite of your three but it’s the first fic I’ve ever read that I wanted the MC to lose. Like as a character I like Tarble and I think you’ve written him exceptionally well but as a person I feel pity and disgust. Which results in me wanting him to lose.

Lightseid

Yeah, that's why I voted for another idea because I knew this one would limit you a great deal. Still it was nice, even if it didn’t bring much.


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