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See No Evil: Shine (ch.18)

🕑 Added 2020-11-11 16:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Neruz

I don't think Virgil has even realized that the cards -are- magic, at least in-universe DC magic, and he certainly hasn't figured out that they're magician training wheels and are just expressing -his- magic rather than having any inherent powers of their own. Proper information on magic is tricky to get in DC unless you know the right people, and most of said right people are either batshit insane psychopaths as likely to murder you for the hell of it as uphold any deal, or part of the Justice League. I expect at some point something will clue Virgil in to the true nature of the cards, but I wouldn't expect any serious smurfing until then; he just doesn't know enough about what is actually happening to properly powergame shit, and he is understandably wary of fucking with something that he simultaneously doesn't understand and absolutely needs for his continued survival.

Adrian Gorgey

I'm with Festive Audacity, really love this. Of all your stories, this one and Going Native are the ones I always look forward to - I just wish Vergil would make more effort to Jailbreak his powers, such as buying more cards or books on magic, but most of all stop pussyfooting around and making some armor, weapons, and gadget that actually let him compete in DC

Malcolm Tent

Ok hands down the best chapter of this story. Finally enough foundation to start getting into YJ territory instead off all the grimdark gang lord stuff. I'm really excited about this story actually, I loved the other version, the writing on this one is better but the last one was more fun and introducing the team gives this story an opportunity to move into more enjoyable territory. TLDR I loved this and cant wait for more.


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