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Risk It All: Unseen Hand (ch. 13)

🕑 Added 2021-06-01 14:52:11 +0000 UTC

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Eldar Zecore

I’m gonna disagree with you about how Robin’s been acting not fitting with his Season 1 personality. He’s acting pretty much like a only child suddenly having a sibling taking up his father’s attention to an extent, which we know he’d actually act like with Jason Todd starting off. Adding onto the fact Ren was so extreme in his handling of Black Mask, and Batman taking the fall for him doesn’t endear him to Ren at all. I image that his attitude is going to change a lot after this chapter because of what Ren tried to do, hell he said it himself. It’s also only been less than a month since the Team even formed

Ashborn2271

Thanks for the chapter I think his idea of owning up to his actions was a good thought but the way he went to do it was a bit naive. He’s still thinking of heroes as the good guys, the world is made up of grey, he needs to become more mature maybe this will help him understand that he was being manipulated by batman and the league to much. I think robin is a bit to much spoiled at least in YJ.

VitAnyaNaked

Excellent, I really want to know the consequences of this and... Ren's anxiety is quite justified ...

Eliezer

I found Batman and Ren both amazingly sympathetic in this section. Neither was being stupid in how they were brought into conflict, neither was stupid in how they fought, both acquitted themselves excellently. The battle between Good and Good is a greater and more difficult pinnacle of writing than the battle between Good and Evil.

Eldar Zecore

Fought*

Eldar Zecore

I honestly could see this being the action that drives our MC off of the Team and away from the Justice League as a whole. I could also see this driving Super Boy away with him, considering his own history is being mentally manipulated. Super Boy hasn’t actually connected with any besides Ren at this point, nor worked through his issues regarding telepathy yet; so I hope he has a strong reaction to what was done to Ren. While I agree that if he has the chance to confess it would have made this into a wider issue, I seriously believe that the League handled this whole situation horribly. Having the non-sidekick Team members find out by Robin storming in a confronting Ren?? They should have had Batman and Wonder Woman go in person to explain the situation in person and have Batman take Ren aside to discuss things so he wouldn’t do anything potentially stupid. Instead he “found” people he’s supposed to befriend and work with, while they tried to stop him from doing what he believed was “right”. I feel that this is exactly how the JL would have handled things in YJ Season 1 through, lol.

Dull Pen

I utterly hate when someones free will has been taken from them. To my own personal moral code, what Martian Manhunter did here was one the worst crimes ever committed. When he realized that it wasn't real I was crushed too. He could have just put him to sleep, but he kept him in an illusion and even let him think that he absolved himself there. Why go that far? As a test of character, I am guessing? Still, horrible conduct towards the MC. Awesome writing though, but I really detest this plot point.

Christian

I’m guessing Martian Manhunter caught him on his exit but everything before that was real. I think the JL and Batman’s stance is pretty reasonable honestly, covering for Ren is the smart move even if he’s gonna be angry about having the decision taken out of his hands. At the very least trying to do the right thing and managing to evade the team should go a decent way towards resolving the condescension and resentment from Robin and by extension KF/Kaldur.


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