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See No Evil: Coming Together (ch. 49)

🕑 Added 2021-07-07 14:56:13 +0000 UTC

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Should_be_working

In young justice there is no speed force just super speed, not much different than super strength just taken to an extreme.

Should_be_working

I honestly can't wait until he starts experimenting with various serums and other magic to increase both his arsenal of meta-subordinates as well as his own power level, after all he obviously has talent in magic and now that he has so much power and wealth plus access to the batcave he will easily come into contact with things like venom, dna of the powerful fighters and honestly he should do his absolute best to recreate the experiment for super speed that the flash and kid flash did.

Killer Pickle

Also don't forget that the power/social ladder in the DC universe is massive when you consider all the gods, demons, reality warpers etc just on earth but then you've got the intergalactic empires such as the green lanterns or apokolips. In my opinion this story is probably your best one, its unique in its premise and it doesn't rely on tropes that don't function or work well in written mediums i.e Gamer. The only way the gamer trope can work is by making the entire world/everyone use it as well or by limiting the extent of the gamer functions to only include methods like the reputation system you came up with which is a lot more interesting then normal but the issue with the shop function that was added later in the story in how it can buy anything subtracts & diminishes how interesting it could be with the reputation and chance games that give prizes. I would definitely think about either trying to remove the shop function from the story through edits or some other way or through a rework of the shop where its more a part of the roulette games i.e by searching for a type of skill then by placing bets to determine the tier through that and difficulty of the game based on odds & the type of skill. Thanks for the chapter btw

Adrian Gorgey

Wasn't expecting this, but i like this route too.. See No Evil is my fave of your stories, though I do like the others too!

Sksk4128

It is one of your better works, no stats or anything like them but you do get a solid sense on progress on top of really good relationships with the other characters

Lightseid

So when you post this on Spacebattles there will be only something like 100 words before you need to cut the rest of the chapter out. XD

Owl Face

Oh shit! I forgot this was a Waifu story!

Good.T

It was good seeing at least one of your MCs is breaking the typical loop of getting-shit-thrown-at&barely-survived&getting-shits-thrown-at-again. I saw you mentioned somewhere that this isn't your most popular story, but I think this is your most unique works. Despite the lack of powerlevels/stats/other numerical indicators in other stories, Vergil showed real progress by climbing up the social ladder, and imo the payout for the climb is the one the best I've read.

godUsoland

Victory!! The lucky bastard

Aelem

Was thinking the same. This victory has to be celebrated!

Mest450

Was hoping for some more plot development but virgil has deserved this stress relief for a while.


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