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Risk It All: Tells (ch. 18)

🕑 Added 2021-07-13 15:08:39 +0000 UTC

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Tarin

I guess risk it all is all caught up on FF.net :\

VitAnyaNaked

Aqualad as a leader is the right decision, he has military experience nevertheless .. Yet their first mission must be successfully completed ...

Luigi Egbert

Great idea from Batman shutting down the more than two identities, cant wait for the next chapter. Is the skip week because of the lack of funding?

Adrian Gorgey

Great schtick

Should_be_working

I quite like the different identities thing you have going. But since you seem to want to make this a novel about looking into ones self and control over your self, I think in instead of him faking and creating a persona it would make more sense to have him try and control his emotional and use them, so each hero identity would be like a portion of his true self i.e kio would be the batman side of him, the traditional and serious side that relises the weight of his job and so brings out his self discipline. In other words he would be all work and nothing else, this identity would always stay in the shadows, even in the future when the team members move on or even joins the league, koi would always stay in the shadows. Beifong on the other hand could bring out his inner uncle iroh and be what he always imagined a hero was, basically it would represent everything he Hope's to become, someone who is incredibly strong that it seems like he would never lose (all avatar stuff is op from bending to chi to the avatar state even blood bending), he would always stay calm and make light jokes while also being a well of knowledge and wisdom, this identity could even be the one to join the league in the future. And finally you could create a 3rd one in the future which would represent his powers, so the real public figure, a arrogant and prideful guy who throws himself into the media, meets politicians and becomes a celebrity, this would be a good way to try and tackle the public and the politics of the world and change the world in a different way by having influence, connections and fame. A hero who seeks fame and fortune basically. Of course he they these would all be the final product after he learns and experiences the hero life, young justice is a long series after all spanning 8 years so far. It would also fit with the recent event of him losing control of his personal feelings back at the mountain, a way for self control as each face would still be him but only a portion so he would need to keep the other emotions he has under tight control while also looking at the world in a different light for each persona, koi being paranoid and more darker, expecting the worst of a situation. Beifong would have to look at things differently however as he would be taking a more leading role having people look up to and learn from him, he would no longer be the student but the master so to say. And finally the 3rd identity would look at things in a more selfish way, like a politician and a celebrity, he would focus more on gains and loses for him and his so called "friends" instead of good and bad.

IdeasGuy

Not for this story since it's a commission. It would feel too much like double-dipping on my audience, so there's only a public release chapter.

Harley Shockley

Isn’t this the same thing that is released to the public? I thought there was an early access chapter or something like that.

Spencer Hydes

Ooo competent delegation and utilizing the varying specialties of the Team members? Solid pick in XO? Methinks Ren isn't going to be as bad a leader as he thinks he is


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