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Gone Native: Compromise (ch. 12)

🕑 Added 2021-09-06 14:55:35 +0000 UTC

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dude13537

She would make a more interesting one than Blackfire or Raven. Plus the power balance would actually be in her favor.

dude13537

-I understand that North Rhelasia has a holiday where they make UN and American training dummies to practice their fighting skills on to ward off evil." There was an accusation in his tone that made Clark wince, because knowing Bruce, that accusation was right on the mark.- I’m confused. What does Bruce Wayne have to do with this holiday? Is it supposed to say “knowing North Rhelasia”?

Athis168

True however how many Amazons are there. Cuz I’m pretty sure it’s less than 10,000 or something. Tarble’s empire numbers 100 trillion. Also bear in mind Amazons have a single culture tarbles empire is made up of thousands of different cultures. There is also a matter of physical equality. Amazons are all around a similar strength level with some being stronger. Tarbles empire has species that are a lot stronger than others. For example the kund and basic non super humans. Though I do believe Diana is probably the best to talk to tarble

Addison Adams

Overall its good, but I’m just an impatient guy so i really want to get to the debate but i completely understand the need to spread it out with more exploritary chapters lkke this one

Kabir Kumar

I liked it. It felt like the conflicting personalities were well written, though I would have like to see Diana's perspective more, as she's the only person who's from an actual paradise which is also ruled over by a monarch with absolute power.

RJKY

I liked the chapter, it came out well. Believable personalities working off of each other, and I like the route the story is going.

dude13537

Alright! I’d been waiting for a Justice League POV chapter, and this one did not disappoint!

Anthony Essex

Nice the Justice League is willing to compromise. I kind of prefer it if they resolved this all diplomatically. Not that fights wouldn't be cool but actually talking about what joining a space empire would be like for earth is very interesting.

Insertusername099

These fools don't know how much they've benefited from Tarbles rule...

Rockinalice

I just want to say (The sheer ego of the Justice League to just assume that the way They believe things should be is the right way and the only way) i going to be honest how i see it if clark or most of the Justice League tried to do things like they do on earth in the wider universe they would Probably end up assassinated within the year the only reason That tarble hasn't been it's because hes literally put the fear of him Into everyone. If some one tried to run things like the Justice League does their wouldnt be an empire in a few years. Because an actual Competent enemy Would gather all the information available on the Justice League that they just let out there And then get rid of them in a way that They would never see coming i can see your Brainaic doing. Still loved the chapter

aj0413

Kara confirmed to become a love interest?

Robolo42

"Conflict is only inevitable if we treat it like it is." Grand mate, absolutely grand. I love what’s happening here, really speaks to me. I hope the writing gets easier, cause peace is all about the next fight, and making sure the next fight never happens.

abdullah khan

I honestly think you could have extended tarbles adventures on Earth. Make him see more of humanity and meet other heros/villans. I feel like we're coming up to some big conclusion too quickly.

LiamOfOrmonde

Personally I liked it but you want me to look at it critically? Okay. It popped out at me there there are a few exact phrases reused from previous chapters in this one. I don’t know if that was intentional or not.


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