Leaqio.com
IdeasGuy from patreon
IdeasGuy patreon

See No Evil: The Warning (ch. 57)

🕑 Added 2021-09-08 15:01:44 +0000 UTC

Comments

Verge

Thanks for the update. Murder weapon's ability sorta reminds me of a Japanese or Korean novel. Where the isekei guy teaches at an evil organization, has bunch of prodigy kids as his student and the only op power he has is a bat that can deal mind breaking pain while simultaneously blessing/healing the target.

Should_be_working

True and that's why I never said I disliked it, I just felt it didn't need an entire chapter for one insignificant gang just to see vergil act as we already know he would. It just feels bad after waiting an entire week that's all.

Humphry(The Heretic)

Yo this chapter cared a lot of importance. This is another chapter that shows people Virgles true colors. He isn’t someone who you can easily mess with and what you do or take form him he will do or take 10 fold. And he personally delivers.

Denis Safiev

I disagree with the first comment.

Should_be_working

I wasnt bashing the story? I'm just saying that this chapter was honestly un-needed. I agree not every chapter needs to be about walking on a blades edge but if he wanted to simply slow the plot down to plan things out he could have focused on the administration of lowtown and how its handling the massive influx of people Or he could have made a side story focusing on how ren and the ninja girl are working together to suppress and manipulate the gangs (this would be a good opportunity to add a bit more depth to both characters, show how they react to each other/bond and make it feel like it adds something to the story even if it doesnt matter all that much to the overall plot) Not every form of criticism is a form of attack its merely my personal opinion and I think I have a right to say it as long as its reasonable and not just flaming it for the sake flaming you know? I do pay to read these storys afterall...

Ethloc

Ignore the ones above. Not every chapter needs to be bigger and more, high stakes. Sure, paying for access makes some feel entitled. They want action all the time or smut. Take all the time you need, you've proven that you can write an entertaining story. I like sitting back and watching it all unfold.

Jordan Davis

Yeah this one was big time filler

Should_be_working

Honestly I liked the chapter as it did follow a purpose but I'm also really disappointed... all that happened was vergil crippled some random gang and learned about blackgate which if we're being honest, we all alread new and expected. So it felt like nothing happened and a waste of a weeks wait.


More Creators