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Gone Native: The Line (ch. 11)

🕑 Added 2021-09-13 15:01:35 +0000 UTC

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Wasn’t chapter 12 supposed to be released yesterday? Or do I have the release schedule wrong? 🤔

KaySchus

I'm not really sure if I understand the direction this arc of the story is going in, which is interesting but frustrating at the same time. Tarble made so many hard choices during the war and in the end he lost almost everything he cared about (the almost being important there). Now he has come to Earth and is facing the first conflict in his morals - a conflict that only exists because they have enough actual firepower to stand up to him. I guess I just don't understand how this has any other ending but conflict; Tarble himself keeps saying that and its fundamentally true because from a galactic standpoint he owns this planet entirely... to walk away would be a massive weakness that he really can't afford right now. I guess in the end I just find it confusing because I don't see any actual resolution to this that makes any sense to me for an entire other volume of story. Before we had a clearly defined goal, even if the goalpost shifted and Tarble's understanding of the galaxy and those around him influenced it, he still had a singular goal to pursue and a clear endgame. Now he is off dealing with this singular planet while I can only assume the other planets under his control somewhat languish without his direct influence. I guess I just don't see what he is really aiming for with this approach at all or how much longer the story can be dragged out to make him stay on Earth. Are we prepping up for a long invasion arc with Tarble sinking an unimaginable number of resources into trying to conquer Earth which is honestly pretty doomed to failure considering how pivotal it is to the entire multiverse? Realistically he should be able to just end the planet no matter how hard the Justice League fights him but in reality I can't see that actually be the resolution to this situation from a storytelling perspective. Or are we instead going to see some convoluted arc where he decides to stay on Earth and be moralized by them forever? End of the day Tarble is a Saiyan and as is constantly shown from the remnants of his previous soul he is already strange for them but he is never going to match the morality of the Justice League even if he wanted to try for some reason. I just don't really see where this Earth arc is actually headed in terms of his long term goals - frankly I would be more interested to see one of the characters from the League/Titans be attached to Tarble (as in sent with him as a kind of envoy, not romantically even if that would also be interesting) to understand his Empire more. They could travel with him and see the things he is trying to do and the kind of scale he has to operate on - an empire where the population of Earth is actually just a rounding error on a report given to him and the sheer scale of things he has to fight off/threaten to provide a peaceful life and prosperity for that Empire.

marids

Personally, I'm sorta disappointed about how he is going about all this. Since he is clearly both not in the right state of mind, and not consulting the people of the rest of his own empire for help. I mean cmon, so what if the other side has so many opinions against him when there should be trillions of supporters for him from his own empire to back his statements up. It's so pitiful to see him standing alone against the Justice League, especially when that's only because he chooses to, and not because he has to. He should really start considering how much more important his own opinions are, which has the weight of trillions to back it up, vs the opinions of those with no more than a few billion on what is equivalent to galactic backwater planet. Honestly, small single-planet sized political matters like this should be too small for him to micromanage when he has advisors for it. Thus, in my opinion, he's only suffering all this BS because he choose to, probably due to how he thinks he deserve it, which is a really sick idea that he needs to be cured of. He needs to get his own mind under control before he tries to influence the minds of others.

marids

I think it's less of a matter of perceived power, and more of how willing Tarble is at using more power. Because Tarble still has Super-Saiyan mode, and the rest of his fleet and armies to call upon if things get more physical. Thus, the real problem is how Tarble's will and determination is seemingly constantly being undermined and questioned by his own self-doubt on whether or not he should even do what he wanted over what these people wanted.

Readm

I keep thinking the same time i mean they are not even taking his side as an option they seem to have already decided the earth isnt his even though hes trying to be civil they need to acknowledge his position and power

Fake Name

Yeah I really think everyone is underestimating Tarble. I would love to see him actually get serious in a fight or do a show of power or something so everybody would stop being so damn condescending to him. He is already being incredibly generous

Lazy Wizard

For all the talk of compromise, there sure is a lot of not compromising being done by the League. So far all they have done to compromise is not immediately jump Tarble. And yet the demand more compromise?

William H

I don't get why they are a thing in serial writing, especially this type of one chapter every so often. For fucks sake we have notifications for when a chapter goes live, I don't need petty, bottom tier psych tricks to keep me coming back.

Epwydadlan

So how much of Tarble is his previous self? you had the whole thing where he like killed his previous self, and the reason I ask that is in your fight with Kara, you likened hitting her, like hitting a brick wall, which Tarble could like blow through with a flick of his fingers? It's nitpicky but wouldn't it be better to liken it to something that would actually be hard for him to hit through? Like maybe a bulkhead of a ship or something?

Sigh. I hate fucking cliffhanger. I always want to start stacking up chapters but cant resist reading.

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Thank you and fuck this cliffhanger like the previous chapter

James Adamson

Double post?


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