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Gone Native: Compromises (ch. 12)

🕑 Added 2021-09-13 15:01:40 +0000 UTC

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Dre'

This Superman is supposed to have a higher power level than even Tarble as a super Saiyan, so when he thinks through destroying the fleet I actually found it believable and even a little bit chilling. Like this is a guy who could probably destroy the cold family one on one, and we know that those monsters have the power to toss around planets with ease.

dude13537

It depends on the iteration of Superman. Some are completely invulnerable to everything. This one doesn’t appear to be like that, though.

Joseph Patrick Toomey

I'm surprised superman is as arrogant as he is, thinking he could take out Tarble's entire fleet. Kryptonians are strong but they're not gods, a few hits from anti-ship cannons and he's dead, he'll probably be able to destroy a few ships before that but he's definitely overestimating himself.

the 3 stooges

No problem

Ethloc

With Going Native there was always a clear goal or enemy to fight with or for. But with this new story the main goal seems to be character growth for Tarble and that is going to be hard, it's very comfortable to have character growth during or after a fight it's much more difficult for a character to be introspective. it's a big shift in story telling, take all the time you need.

Big ToFu

Just adding my two cents it's funny that Diana and super man is getting grilled while the US is moving troops onto a land just liberated. I know we are biased on thing as we grow but damn that's sadly on point of what the US would do, Sigh. I also find it funny how the UN is willing to send child soilders to die but would refuse to send their own kids to war.

Matt M

I also really enjoyed this chapter, it's nice to see nuance from Superman which is often missing. One of the whole points of him is that he is supposed to be the best of humanity despite being an alien, and that should include understanding. But yes, I think you're being overcritical on yourself while Gone Native is a very different story from Going Native it is equally enjoyable !

Mulchmeat

This chapter is does a good job of giving more perspective on the entire situation. I am a sucker for reactions to the actions of a protagonist. It helps that the reactions of Earth and the Justice League are both relatable and believable. Good work!

Blair Shirley

I am very much enjoying Gone Native so far, its being an amazing blend of action, both physical and mental, while also including lots of characterization to everyone.

Should_be_working

I wonder how the league will look at tarbles empire... dont forget a good portion of it was managed by his brother who basic crippled a good portion of it from the economy to the ecosystem. Though from what I remember at the start tarble is currently redistributing the planets for the various races and is slowly building his own system for his empire while prioritizing the people with basic necessities like food, water, homes, medication for health and education. He's also keeping a tight leash on the various corporations and businesses to make sure to avoid inflation of prices to avoid poverty to his people. All in all hes building a good base and crime shouldn't be a major problem as the military has already got a long standing system and discipline not to mention loyalty they have to tarble... their war god. In the end, while it still has many problems and is lacking in many places, overall it should be quite peaceful and shouldn't have major problems. Those that exist would either be from the fact its relatively new and still building so it's still quite chaotic and messy or from individuals and races who have alot of pent up aggression/resentment and are taking it out by complaining and arguing over other things like who has the better planet (aka size or area its located) or that they deserve more because they lost more, so on so forth. They are still problems but controlled problems that can and are being fixed and addressed.

jack

I think you did a fine job, and I'm especially glad to see Frieza get mentioned. Tarble's past and character cannot be fully understood by the JL until they examine Frieza.

Big ToFu

I like this chapter alot more than the last.

It's not bad... Not bad at all.

Pakisabi

I really enjoyed this chapter, the whole politicking aspect of the sequel is what keeps me coming back every week. Keep up the great work.

IdeasGuy

Sorry about that everyone! Don't know whats been going on -- I went over a year without these kinds of mistakes, but all of a sudden, I've made it twice in a single week.

Morde24

repeat chapter :(

Nice

Gordon Freemason

Yay it's fixed!

CallOut4

Fixed

Johnbonken

Repeat chapter, please fix.

Repost

CallOut4

I mean ya... Most of us just lurk

rjjn

I love how it took seconds for this to become the most active comment section on Patreon

Axcel McAver

Um. This is a repeat of Chapter 11.

Should_be_working

Isn't this the same chapter as last week?

Gordon Freemason

Sir I dare say there must be some mistake

CallOut4

Repost

Diego

Reposted Chapter 11

The Human

No longer relevant, so I'll just take 'first' I guess? I am filled with self disgust... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


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