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Gone Native: Compromises (ch. 12)

🕑 Added 2021-09-27 14:51:14 +0000 UTC

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Aaron Kasai

Good chapter, I enjoy every single one of these. I am curious to see how Tarble's empire is handling things, he did say it was a bit of a mess and such, and he is spending a lot of his focus on a single planet right now. Although, Tarble's current setup doesn't have him handling much domestic stuff anyway, he has people for that, so it should be fine as long as nothing major occurs. I saw a lot of rather negative reviews of ffn, but I feel most of them can be dismissed for various reasons. The only real critique I have is repetition. Phrases, similar or worded different to each other about peoples thoughts on Tarble, or his thoughts on others and stuff like that. I don't think the thoughts themselves are wrong or anything, it makes sense, but I feel a lot of them are rather repetitive after twelve chapters. I imagine it'll probably stop once we leave the opening arc of the story and people are familiar where the character stand. Looking forward to how things go, and who the antagonist of the story will be going forward.

KaySchus

Wonderful chapter and I hope we spend a decent amount of time after this off world to give them some time to cool off and Tarble some time to self-reflect within his own empire as opposed to on Earth where he is going to feel a subtle pressure no matter what is happening due to the pushing of local governments and the League. Really excited to have Kara visiting his empire, and potentially the Titans as well - a lot of fun opportunities there with the personalities involved and a nice chance for some of them to get to see the wider universe and the true scale that he has to operate on.

Eldar Zecore

Great chapter!

Caelleh

I think conversations like this are just hard to write. You know where you want to go, but you have to manipulate every character into getting there naturally. It's a hassle, but it turned out well here. I'm looking forward to seeing Kara's tour of the Empire.


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