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Risk It All: Taking the Pot (ch. 29)

🕑 Added 2021-11-16 15:54:15 +0000 UTC

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Kabir Kumar

I like that Ren still has some awkwardness, despite having high skills and stats. He still feels like a person, which is great. So many stories with superhuman characters turn into this weird thing that just feel like a power fantasy. I like that your characters are always struggling. That they don't have it easy. It makes the problems feel more real. And their strength if they solve a problem, also feels more real.

Kabir Kumar

I think there was a fair amount.

Luigi Egbert

Great adult action chapter but I can not wait to get back to the plot. You weave a great story!

Pascal1995

"I hoped that my copy was having a great of a time with Kid Flash, and maybe Batman, but I somehow doubted it was having as much as I was." Yeah, I doubt it to.

The Panda Queen

Huh I don't think I've ever been disappointed by a lemon until now, not that it was bad FAR from it, I just wanted a different kind of action and more game elements, seeing Ren level up or get stronger via the game is just so satisfying but I'll probably reread this chapter later since I skimmed through it so I could get to the plot


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