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See No Evil: Beginning of the End (ch. 85)

🕑 Added 2022-04-27 14:57:45 +0000 UTC

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Killer Pickle

I hated this chapter I really did. I haven’t really liked anything since Vergil killed the joker, the court scene was nice as it showed a lot of the earlier cleverness of the story but after the healing pill (should of really made it function due to the blessing from the drug god instead of nano machine because that’s to powerful of a thing to be commercial as all it would take would be someone to buy a pill and reconstruct the nano machine and then they would have a functioning self replicating machine, that requires programming) and the chip being revealed it just failed to live up to what Vergil is, a smart social butterfly with a ruthlessness that knows no bounds, how the chip was used as an excuse just seems so lazy and simple and not Vergil really. I dunno it’s just my thoughts about the story as after the Vergil killing the joker you tend to just whip out all these dead ex machina things out one after the other without really building up to them, for instance the micro dust sized cameras like cool but you never showed making them and on top of that how are they even being powered/sending a signal when you down size machines the hardest part is powering for long term and not short circuiting the thing. There’s other things like that the pill for one on the top of my head also the factory’s that build Vergils products you never actually showed us Vergil setting them up you did tell us that Vergil was thinking about it but never showed us the development also with that there’s no possible way for Vergil to of set it up in just one layer even if you just used atomic printers as it would steel require raw materials, then theirs moving the products out, packaging, shipping which we have no idea how Vergil does it or with who then theirs marketing and contracts for company’s to sell his stuff and the two months that was said how long it took for him to set all that up is way to short even if he had all the infrastructure ready to sell it people wouldn’t straight away buy it it takes time like minimum 6 months to find out if a products selling. Also don’t forget that somehow Vergil is producing for the ENTIRE WORLD now but still only in one layer, I call bullshit.

Sage Berthelsen

I think he’ll jump to final fantasy.


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