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Gacha God: Moment to Breathe (ch. 5)

🕑 Added 2022-10-29 15:08:50 +0000 UTC

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Alexis Medor

I don't really know about this story, honestly. It feels like he's way too in control, so nothing really has any high stakes. He doesn't have a goal, so he has nothing to work towards that give the story any suspence on his goal of reaching it, nor is there any tension when he can just rewind the clock. He doesn't really care about what he's been doing either so far, so it's hard to care for me as well.

Lynxarius

He said Michelle didn't have any.

Wanous

I had an idea pop into my head. Ned and Michelle both have magic and MJ get superpowers somehow and even when Pete gets spiderized he's still the least powerful one of his friends.


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