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Best of Intentions: Big Iron (ch. 16)

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 16:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Glitched Knights

He didn't play the RE2 Remake, so he doesn't know anything about Irons. Rude is paranoid about him, but that's it's. Irons outed himself when he left the RPD without letting anyone know

aj0413

Ah. I wasn’t doubting out resident genius had gripes, but I want sure if it might’ve been overblown or untrustworthy info (like Alice existence) Sounds like this was clear cut and no chances could be taken either way

Zero00heroes

Wow, I shouldn’t be surprised because I’ve read most of your stories but damn instant cap the moment he saw Nikolai. I mean, yeah if I have met a knowledge and know who Nikola is, I’m putting a bullet in his ass too, but the fact that Carlos didn’t immediately try to put a bullet in Rude is surprising as he is one of the few people that is genuinely good and loyal. Honestly, even if Rude can get rid of most of the hoard in the city, the fact that umbrella has unleashed its other experiments doesn’t make it safer. It just lets the worst shit have a bigger stomping ground to hunt in. Also, without Nikolai reporting in umbrella is definitely going to send Wolfpack to collect rude. Now that they don’t have any down eyes on him. I just got a feeling they’re going to ruin the evacuation efforts.

Majora

Lil nikki has extra orders from umbrella. Collect combat data, assassinate POI's, collect some materials, destroy others. Hes also the kind of bastard who executed said orders, including getting his team killed, for something as vain and pathetic as a retirement fund. So much so he jokes about auctioning the t virus vaccine and the data internationally rather than delivering it when talking to Jill after she kills a mutant godzilla and saves his life several times. Hes 110% untrustable retard energy.

Spider Nerd

That... might have been a little premature.

aj0413

So…anyone know why?

Majora

Long delays for the holidays and rewrites aside, this was an alright chapter. It needs proofreading in lots of spots obviously, but other than that id mention the breakneck pace. Its somewhat evened out with nice character moments with stars/umbrella, but it definitely felt like the whole chapter was a sprint start to finish. Is the plan really to end racoon city by chapter 20? Its really starting to feel like thats in the cards, and im suprised that with all the levels that rude has cheated you chose to sprint to the finish line. I dont know if you have any intentions of continuing past racoon city, but there is a reason most dnd games dont progress past the teens for levels. Even with batshit crazy matter from nothing super monsters most classes, but spellcasters especially break games, and fun over their knees around 6th circle spellcraft. I enjoy the majority of your stories, but they share a habit of becoming unmanagably stompy and running afoul of lack of stakes. Right now really just golden path and legends never die seem to have dodged that, particularly because siegfried has his antagonists still, and because paul really hasnt had a chance to show us how far ahead hes working yet.

Ironforge

Well this is going to create a few headaches. Though if Nicholai was on a kill on sight list, is Irons on it too?

That Warden

Lol love rude


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