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The Good Life: Creeping Sedition (ch. 85)

🕑 Added 2025-05-02 15:11:32 +0000 UTC

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Sleazebag

You're not making any sense. The stuff you're complaining about at the end is literally what his plan is and what has been described in the last two chapters. If you wrote this 4-5 chapters ago it would at least make some sense but he *just* decided to get his shit together like you asked.

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Law is my least favorite of the protagonists you’ve written. He’s all over the place. I liked the first arc because he was hamming it up as a 2D villain and pursuing his dream of fighting heroes. Then in Fallout, it was some sort of colony sim with mini side quests. It was kinda cool because of the novelty of Law as some sort of reluctant antihero…Then comes Arcane, and he spends a year futzing around over a bet with Asami, one of the least developed supporting characters, who then transitioned to major antagonist. Expected, but also random? In the sense that Asami isn’t a Hero with a capital H, not even close, so it was odd narrative choice. Again, Law is all over the place, for the last 60k words he’s just been doing nothing but waiting for the other shoe to drop. what are his goals here? If it’s to defeat All Might, why doesn’t he invade MHA? If it’s rescuing Yoruichi, why isn’t he building a portal? If it’s breaking the rabbit lady, why isn’t the story advancing that plot? I hope he can get his shit together and start pursuing goals, so I can start rooting for him again.

Cameron Burchett

I dont know why, but there’s just something satisfying about a completely unrepentant morally bankrupt monster. Law is my second favorite of your protagonists, and third place isn’t even close. First is, of course, Sieg.


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