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Author's Note. Eri Arc Rewritten
🕑 Added 2025-11-16 17:22:13 +0000 UTCHey Guys. Sorry for the absence for the past two days.
Without wasting much of our time, I received reviews stating that the Eri encounter didn't really sit right with a lot of people.
And after pondering over ... I realized I may have made a mistake. See, the main issue with it isn't really the fact that his actions are unreasonable, but it's the way I set it up.
Eri's chapter is rather heavy. Which is not he direction I planned with this fic yet somehow ended up writing anyway. If it was just that, then it wouldn't be that bad. The problem then lays in the fact that the follow-up "Manhole Arc" returns to that comedic vibe I originally envisioned, leading to a tonal whiplash I did not intend to begin with.
You probably get the idea. Hence after reading it over and over, I couldn't bring myself to just continue with the glaring mistake and spent the last two days brainstorming what to do to fix it. Leading to what I am about to do right now.
Rewrite the Eri Chapter and followup events.
I plan to shift the whole Manhole cover Arc to a later date during either the Internships or the work studies while having the encounter with Eri solely occupy the chapters the Manhole cover arc should have then link up with the training and sports festival as It originally was with a few minimal changes to details.
Read the new chapter 11 after this and tell me wha
t you think.
Comments
Future
The new chapters or old ones? Or both?
allen pellissery
Can you make them all into a collection
