enyoeerie
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Progress of the update.
🕑 Added 2022-02-28 15:45:32 +0000 UTCHi! Just a quick progress update. The last two weeks were busy. Slowly, but surely I'm getting closer to the update.
1. I revised and finished the text for 4 events(event with Mark and Tiffany, an event with boys, and 2 events at the lake)
2. I made 5 new events (2 with Mark's father, and 3 in the neighbor's route) and started to make pictures for them.
3. I sent texts to translate.
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Overall state of the update:
3D locations - 100%
New characters - 100%
Text 70% (it's less now because I decided to add new content to the update)
Translation 40% (Progress with translation is going slow because for now I translate from one translator and don't want to spend my money on others)
Pictures 45% (I did a lot of new pictures but I also came up with a lot of new stuff which needs to be finished too)
These are next routes (including small interactions, events and scenes) that I need to do for this update:
Opening scenes for this update:
1) The scene with Tiffany packing her things.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
2) The car ride to the countryside.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
3) Meeting with Mark's father.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
4) Melanie is cleaning the house, cooking in the kitchen.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
5) Mark and his father talking.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
6) Tiffany talks with neighborhood boys in the garden.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
7) A small event with Tiffany in the garden.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
7.5. Tiffany, Mark, Melanie are going on the lake.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
Lake events
8) A lot of different Interactions on the lake with Mark, Melanie and Tiffany.
Pictures 70%
Text 100%
8.5. Melanie and Tiffany changing in the car.
Pictures 100%
Text 100%
9) Event. Boys peeping at Tiffany on the lake.
Pictures 70%
Text 100%
10) New event at the lake with boys.
Pictures 20%
Text 55%
Home events
11) Event. Tiffany is trying on her clothes and may ask Mark for advice.
Pictures 45%
Text 100%
11.5 Another choice and different event. Boys peeking at Tiffany.
Pictures 0%
Text 0%
12) 2 Events when Sebastien calls Melanie and he suggests doing some fun stuff.
-Outside shower with Mark's father.
Pictures 60%
Text 95%
-Event with Sebastien's gift(dildo)
Pictures 0%
Text 40%
13) Mini event. Melanie is tending to flowers in the garden. It's very hot and she's all sweaty in shorts and loose tank top.
Text 100%
Pictures 0%
Translation 100%
Code 100%
14) Another event between Mark and Tiffany.
Text 100%
Pictures 20%
15) An event and different interactions with boys at home.
Text 60%
Pictures 30%
16) Different Mark's father events with Tiffany.
Text 80%
Pictures 10%
17) Events with neighbors, Melanie and Tiffany depending on your choice through the game.
Text 60%
Pictures 35%
18) Event between Melanie and Sebastien after a family trip.
Text 0%
Pictures 20%
Comments
Enyo Eerie
Thank you! 💗 Yes, I pay close attention to characters, their clothes, so everything would look cute and neat. Thank you for noticing that. It's always pleasant when people notice my hard work!
Enyo Eerie
Thank you for your kind words! About emotions - I totally agree with you. This problem is very noticeable in the old events. There is almost no emotion there. But if you will take a look at the new ones, especially the last update with Kate and Ashley you will see that I worked on this problem and I hope I improved!
Daisame
Having played more of the title, I really like the detail you put on your models. First, they are all gorgeous. But rally appreciate the way you get their outfits to fit as well. So many other tiles have these exaggerated, super unrealistic body types. Yours are very well done and it appears you take great care getting outfits to fit them. Maybe it is even easier when they have more realitic proportions. The character dialog is very good and has enough meat without getting slow and tied up in needless exposition. I still stand by my previous critique that it would beneift from more intermediate scenes with more emotion and moments that lend weight to the depth of each interaction. Maybe that is a tall order with the quality that each secene currently has. I am certainly no expert.
Daisame
I like the visual style of the game and I believe there is a good story to be had here. My only real critism is the lack of emotion in the scenes. There seems to be a handful of renders that are just cut back and forth to and no change in facial animation or emotives. With something like this that seems to be very story driven, it makes it more difficult (for me anyway) to get emotionally invested in the characters. I hope you will have the time and ability to add much more emotive scenes to the story.
