Brotherly Love - Gohan X U16 Bra [DBM][Doujinshi][Sketch][Ongoing]

Gerardo Bottiglieri

The image of Gohan and his wives and children is just perfect. Beautiful

Omni

Damn that is brutal. A fate worse than death. Poor Goten

Happy to hear you like it. I'll be sure to update it soon.

Jay

I love this comic, its my favourite out of all the ones you've done and I can't wait to see where it leads

Draconic Hermit

Goku's Battle Fetish has been triggered.

GamerLegend09

Did his hair just......Transform into Pure Energy!?

Pedro Jose Bello Belen

I should have known XD

DeMonte Prince

Yep he fucked up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Pedro Jose Bello Belen

Oh boy, I do hope Gohan didn’t do what I think he did...

DeMonte Prince

................. I am a little scared look like gohan probably cut her 2 Shreds

DeMonte Prince

And now we see you have a love for legend of Zelda breath of the wild

William Rch

"come for the action, stay for the porn" Am I the only one for whom it's the opposite? I came for the porn but I love the action

Immortal Dragon

Bra's energy axe was pretty 🔥 tho.

Omni

You've been hit by *BANG BANG* You've been struck by* BANG* A SMOOTH CRIMINAL 🔥🔥🔥

DeMonte Prince

MOONWALK NEVER DIE

Qrow Nightshade

I'm dying with Gohan being the next king of pop. That moonwalk though. What next the nae nae?

DeMonte Prince

Really Michael Jackson plus DMC5 lol

GamerLegend09

This right here was responsible for me contributing to your Patreon

Immortal Dragon

Lol So this Gohan is also the Dragon World's King of Pop.

Immortal Dragon

Gohan's powers are cool. It just makes me think how DB really needs to start getting more creative and giving the characters their own unique powers.

Omni

Damn. Get laid out

ZaaZoJo

your fights are SUPER cool

Omni

Why's that ?

Immortal Dragon

Lmao WTF is that attack name. Bra just went full chuunibyou. Never go full chuunibyou.

Immortal Dragon

Well shit, this Gohan has fought some of the most broken beings in fiction, the gods of the Cthulhu mythos. No wonder he's so overpowered. Also it's good to see he always has Zangya and Videl scouting out other girls for him. Lol

DeMonte Prince

Hehe family of perv lol

Omni

The Balls on this dude. Unbelievable 😂👌🏿 OMG you went full Jiraiya didn't you !?

Kick her ass Gohan. This has been a long time coming

Qrow Nightshade

Dam your Gohan such a real G. He knows cup sizes just by touching

Lol. Yeah. But even after hearing it, it's still hard for them to comprehend considering how powerful Bra is.

Pedro Jose Bello Belen

Really? Did nobody else hear Gohan's tale and how much he and his companions went through in order to get so strong? Because that'll help understand why he's that strong anyway.

Kick her ass gohan. This has been a long time coming

Thanks. Honestly, I think Asura is a little too obsessed with his OP Hyper Bra...

I know there will be porn in this but god am I loving the current action. Specially since the recent multiverse issue that has come out.

Jay

Im honestly deep into this story

As someone who's writing his own Dragon Ball story (one with OCs and another focusing around Goku Black while taking ideas from the games), I can see the point of what you're trying to do with Reina. One could say she makes no sense but that was the point as she takes what was established in the series and flips it on its head, making way for new forms of techniques and creativity in order to achieve that level of technique instead of just getting stronger and hitting your foes really really hard. If anything, she reminds me of what the series tried to do with Hit as he's the only character (from my POV) that relies on technique alone and not strength.

That's the whole point of her. She flips the predictable script and lore of DBZ on its head by introducing a character that defies all of it using a familiar medium, but in a way very few contemplated. Since the time Master Roshi and his school was introduced, it was all about building physical strength and knowledge of building that strength... and nothing else. They completely ignored technique- as commented by one of the contestants in the preliminary rounds in the first ever tournament. When they saw Goku's stance, it was absolutely horrid and full of holes.

0 Jordinio 0

Eh, while the idea is interesting, this chick makes no sense on the lore of Dbz. Your ki output is your energy and life force, the stronger it becomes, the more powerful you become in setting physically when using it. It's just flat out impossible for your oc to get that strong without using ki in dbz.

Benjamin Shklyar

The other interesting addition to the story. one unrelated question I have is do you plan on ever coming back to fanfiction soon? I'm really curious what you plan on have doing with alter age, maoyu, and ONI. Honestly I'm more curious about the Naruto ones the most since those haven't been updated in a while now

Sure, but not to the full extent that Zangya does. She can use magic to seal, bind, drain energy, as well as other supplementary skills, which is ideal for someone like Scorch.

I'm pretty sure piccolo knows magic too

It was pretty brutal. Reina takes out all the Z fighters before moving on to Gohan. She shuts down his ability to go Super Saiyan and paralyzes his arms. The fight is interrupted and they stop, with Reina challenging Gohan in a week's time and Gohan taking a time out to train using Reinas style to fight her. They have a rematch in Satan City where Gohan wins, barely.

Omni

Damn how bad was the fight between Gohan and Reina ?

DeMonte Prince

She seems a little mad🤣🤣🤣

You're quite close to the mark. This Gohan at first aspired to just increase his strength, but then quickly shifted focus to improving his technique and control instead.

Omni

You know I kinda see your version of Gohan being something akin to a Grandmaster of sorts. Applying each ability and advantage of his forms to his base state. While constantly adapting and adding multiple things to his skill set therefore making him Insanely versatile

The finger pointing while Bra's trying to get the drop on him? Yes.

Omni

Was that a DMC 5 reference ?

Immortal Dragon

Well, you definitely got this Bra's smug and headstrong personality down pat.

I'd rather look outside the box for techniques and give the characters other skills that don't rely on the overused transformations concept. That's why Nova Saiyan for me hasn't been confirmed in story yet. It's more of a DPS test.

UI is supposedly a technique that allows you to dodge, counter and strike purely on instinct, as the name suggests, without using any of your senses. Supposedly fighting solely on instinct makes fighters a step above the others because they don't have to worry about thinking, looking, or strategizing, because they do it immediately and almost instantly. Its OP in Hajime no Ippo because both Wally and Itagaki (to an extent) use their instincts for boxing to beat up on people without being touched, and in other shows where fighting is concerned instinct has always been a key factor for victory. DBZ is one of the first to make this a transformation, which I find irritating because a technique where no one can touch you because you can evade without looking and overwhelm other people's senses just through movement is such an overblown ability.

At this point he's superior to post Buu arc Vegito.

Omni

There's another thing I've been meaning to ask, how will your Gohan stack up against fusion in general ?

Omni

Can someone say "Max Tsundere" ?

Animelover

found the best way to get around this is if it doesn't load look at the top left corner there is usually a little pic icon which is torn right click that and go open in new tab

There seems to be issues with the pages loading on a couple of my uploads, in which patrons can't see my pages as they're not loading or appearing blank. I'm tossing up a couple more image copies to test it. Let me know if problem still persists.

I've tried re-uploading it. Maybe there was a problem with the maintenance.

Avon

hmm This cover page seems to have the same loading problem the Goku X Videl new page does and doesn't load.

Omni

Kick her Ass Gohan