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[M4F] One More Time With Feeling

🕑 Added 2023-10-19 20:52:30 +0000 UTC

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JL

This is phenomenal! The writing is so good, and your narration is so well done! The sound effects made this so immersive. I can see why it took so much work to edit. Thank you for this masterpiece! 💖

🍎star⭐️

Okay what the FUCK? First of all, I have never personally experienced being horny and on the brink of tears at the same time so that was new 🙃 thanks. Kidding aside though, I have never heard something quite like this before. I’m sure it was very taxing but god, I need more. I always adore your improvs the most because your creativity and scene structure is so unique, but this? This is next level. I mean ??? The sheer amount of attention to detail you put into this is insane. The atmospheric sounds, the shift between narration and dialogue, THE IMAGERY, the DAMN CHARACTER BUILDING. You packed heavy history that I could literally feel in my chest in such a short amount of time. The listener’s train of thought was expertly woven into the story too. It was very real and messy, the way the mood switched from teasing to gutting to pure desperation. I’m in awe. If you ever plan on doing something like this in the near future, I will definitely crash out. Sorry for the long comment but I just had to say something. You’re incredibly talented, and your big ass brain fascinates me. Keep pushing boundaries and exploring outside of your comfort zone, because you seem to excel every time you do. I’m living for it. Yas king werk and all that shit. I’m going to replay this now.

PengTingSeokJin

Even though I'm incredibly late to the party, I thought I'd leave a comment as this is actually one of my favourite pieces that you've done. I don't think I've ever heard a narrative style audio done so well. What I really love is that its of the POV of the listener. it takes immersion to another level and it puts my brain directly into that quiet space i enjoy being in when i listen to audios. The writing is so so good and despite it only being 19mins you managed to give the characters more depth than most novels can in 20 chapters. I fully see someone swiping you up to do an audio book someday 😅 I'll stop before this becomes an essay. Really good audio 💜

whisperboyy

youre gonna make me blush, ty lemon 🖤

LemonLoaf

Honestly, this was exquisitely agonizing. I have so much I want to say but I don’t think my words can do this justice. That piece was executed with exceptional artistry. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. 🖤

whisperboyy

thank you rose! im def looking to create a varied library 🖤

rosemajeste

Oh my goodness! Never in a million years would I think that this narration style would work with this type of audio, but you definitely knocked it out of the park. Every time you try something new, it turns out really well and I think that’s a testament to your talent and dedication to creating the best experience for listeners. You are very versatile, and I think it’ll be interesting to see how your audio discography grows in the future 😊

whisperboyy

thank you red! i think its important to get out of the comfort zone which i felt i was in for a bit, so i really felt like experimenting, super happy that you vibed with it <3

Lizzy 💃🏻

Big fan of the narrative format and this was just top tier. Immersive sfx and the story was just sexy and real. Really, really enjoyed it, Ty for your hard work, you’re so talented, Whisper❤️