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The Tiger and the Dragon: Act 12, Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-02-17 08:16:35 +0000 UTC

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Zarik0

This chapter was really good, i liked it a lot, though i wanted a bit more "focus"/accentuated things with some 3-4 lines added in this chapter about Saracca reaction to things when he realize things (body movement and etc) AND more importly the reaction of the Lords (who know him and what he represent) reacting to his own reaction (and of his people bristling) when it happen, a bit more drama and focus/emphasize on it etc, it passed to fast and like not big deal when they realized they get had hard and its even more terrible and problematic, 2-3 line emphatized on the Lords side and reaction/though/etc on Saraca reveal info and about him too and his reaction (also his reaction to the "Sage" and of his own people too about it?) I wanted to see/read 2-3 lines emphasized of them squirming and bristled a bit here in reaction to all these things/points :P Also too bad Saracca don't hold his cape and position a bit more here and make them know that he is a WarMaster (he is no?) when he start taking a more involved place and action in this situation and Rana Saj point that and with how he act, so that Saraca make his position and help a bit more clear here and the boundary he will place for his side and cooperation Little Personnal preference on little things hey :P Too bad seem the next chapter will be SK Pov, i love so much the Beastman Pov at the moment and with the situation that they are in Also don't forget the scrying is not over, so the rabbit can be out of the bag at every moment with human getting not killed (though i doubt it with how rushed Saraca side are and limited in mana) but we can expect this "new" to happen in the middle of thing and confuse/dumbstruck Saracca hard :P With how it happen, i'm betting a good possibility is Beastman get "crushed" hard (like half of it or etc get fucked) but manage to retreat and etc but with heavy loss (by undead and by Queen angry action) and Saraca and co realizing things in the middle of the action or after and maybe start try some diplomaty and etc with some canal oppenning (Illysh can be one of them or/and play a role into that at some point, or some talk happen at some point) Also SK will let undead horde mask drop as planned for this battle but will not have it too much "easy" and get some minimal setback i guess (and will learn much) because Saracca and co with their help/counsell will change lot of thing for Beastman side with how he get more involved as of now vs what SK learned/seen and prepared as of now of the Beastman

Vladimir Merritt

Short of Bonedsddy taking his ring off infront of the gathered lords.. or Lollibaba using the souls of the impared to make a point... I honestly don't know enough about DnD that would make Saraca take Ludi seriously... on the other hand plenty of souls for Florine to "pluck"...


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