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The Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 3, Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-08-10 17:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

conkerer

Love the ratcheting tension, like a pot of water starting to whine from the tension but not yet starting to boil, like a bowstring being stretched another inch from full draw, like a loud inhale right before the expected shout

Zarik0

Brutal Demiurge xD Deleting the entire Royal Army as they are a bit bothersome or its good if they dissapear now for the plan, it sure is a way to 'manage' a piece of the board so as to not bother with this piece again and make thing easy to influence/manage without it for the future and the plan for it :P Make me think with how much we get tell about Prince Felipe (and how he have some idea gained by experienced the world outside), i really wonder if even Demiurge will let him go back as its very easy to act here and control these new piece coming before they add extra work, i mean targeting only his ship (and a few more) and make him dead by a 'sea monster' or even the whole fleet or most of it can be sure to 'delete' potential piece coming in the board in HK that will need extra work/plan if they appear, making the whole fleet dissapear with no new of it will be funny for the faction (and country) who is building itself (and start friction with others) in the wait of his coming, or just some few survivor ship bringin the new fo the disaster, or the new of Felipe death so no royal anymore and so after Caspond Death, mega chaos and civil war with all Noble factions (and others) moving everywhere and in every direction after this, yes i really wonder why Demiurge if he can Delete the entire Royal Army like that, why he will even bother to let Felipe (and maybe even the whole fleet) come back and add unecessary complication and potential disturbance of the plan, seem way easy to write them off too (atleast Felipe (and all troublesome piece in this fleep) with some few ship who where close to him at the moment of a 'sea monster' attack) Seem unecessary complication to let new piece go into the board if they can be written off so easely like that to simplify things As a side note: Would like to have some pov or part or atleast info about the Slane Theocracy side/view on the HK area/side, they sure to have some spy or etc no? or Demiurge manage to clean them well here and cut most of their info? would be interesting to know what they know about what happen here in HK and what they reaction here about it too and what they try to do, that will be interesting too if some of these spy have some 'interaction'/intersection with Liam at some points (as they would be the only one 'capable' in the area and so we can expect some friction with Liam and interest on them of Liam if he scout them sniffing around, better yet if he catch one or two, would be interesting to have this throw into the pot too and the reaction to HK people about some Slane agent coming into their knowledge :) Can be a juicy add depending how its done, and can be linked t other things in SK (i liked a lot the E Rantel little part with the Inn/bar of the spy who are meeting and interacting all here :P)

Sol

nice. tyftc


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