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The Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2023-10-03 11:08:01 +0000 UTC

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Nodon667

I Kind of think this IS going a Bit too far. I know it's a Part of Human Nature to find patterns where there are none and her blaming everything on House restelo would be in Charakter somewhat. But i Just don't See her being this Barrow minded especially after the blacksmith Realisation she should by now Just by simply looking around the corpse have come to a Realisation closer to the faith of the six than whatever she is doing now. She even Had that sprach about being strong in what you are doing to the little girl in camp

Zarik0

You a tease author, dodging the clash and interaction at the last second between our character and faction/group (Liam/Saye) :)) guess it will be later xD Well i guess Saye is going to go like that too :) Neia is so brain-dead xD its like Saye said before, she is simply Broken in the head in a lots of things... Damn ready to snipe a man just like that, she is so gone and past the point in her head xD All these part with Neia dumb act can only be taken by me in a comedic way :) (even if i know IRL in our world that also happen like that too...) Though like others people said i would like that it advance a bit on the plot (Neia real dumb act/part and 'focus' on it is good only for a time, past few chapter feel like to have too many of them (and 'same') in succession and are all time here) Well i guess you just put some proper fundation in Hoburns and the character and plot present for what is coming, so soon :) Interesting too how Mrs and Mister Urre shaken off the effect of Neia skill/brainwash/message when they get into a situation when their suffering ended, guess that Neai oratory skill work on only desesperate and suffering people

Saphy

Yep, wondered when Neia would get an unfortunate dose of logic and reality, and I am not disappointed at her reaction, lol. What intrigues me is Saye making only a minimal attempt at pointing out how reasonable it is - she must seem to think that allowing Neia to rile up the corps against Restelo is a good thing. That or she can't be bothered to explain, anyway. Additionally, I am becoming increasingly suspect that Neia has in fact 'mind controlled' herself to some extent, with the exact same oratory abilities she uses to convince others, as an Evangelist.


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