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Before the Storm: Act 06, Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2024-05-19 12:08:01 +0000 UTC

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ovrsurge

These last few chapters have been a little bit excessive on meme density for me. I like them in isolation but skill issue felt a bit forced and now we have everything changing with the fire nation attacking. I mean it makes sense and works for world building at least. But it does feel like the density is just a little too much. Everything else is as excellent as always. I'm fascinated to learn more about the Yeti, as well as the personal beliefs of the Krkonose. Where on earth did you learn so much about cultures, slavery, biology, creative writing, linguistics, patterns in religion etc. And why apply that to a fanfiction about Overlord of all things. I love it, but this feels too high quality for what its doing.

Sara

"We were content to live our lives in harmony with our little part of the world, but all that changed when the great enemy sent his followers against us." But everything changed when the fire nation attacked! XD

Zarik0

“Ice good? Elemental? Dragon?” “Elementals are Elementals and act as Elementals will. “They claim to worship three elemental gods. One of earth, one of ice, and one of wind. “Strange,” Pinecone said. “A being of pure elemental energy with the intelligence and will to communicate with others is exceedingly rare. The formation of a triumvirate should be next to impossible. A sign of the times, perhaps?” I don't think their gods are Elementals elemental, seem like Human gods with Elemental meaning, still need to see these 'gods' in true, if they are of the Yeti race (potential player/NPC/Yggdrasil monster) the question will be how long Yeti have in lifespan... These Fire guy in their history, Dwarf civ maybe? or a incursion of a group dropped by Yggdrasil (Demon Gods or a dungeon of it and etc) or coming for realm below Still find it strange that the Krkonoše seem to be so against it and more going straight acting on it like that If they learned that this Yeti civ was doing the same on all their frontier and very often and permanently, i would say yeah, but as far as they know its seem to be only done at the moment and on a place where they expand, so a temporary thing and a 'local' one, temporaty disruption and etc Its just 'nature' and competition between group (we had seen how Glasir Dryad see these thing (what is nature and etc with relationship of the races/group between them) and i doubt the Krkonoše see it very differently) Well they have hint that Illish get that this Yeti civ go for some fucked up thing similar to Slane, (even if for now they seem focused on the moutain and not too much disrupting 'transform the world in Ice bs') but she doesn't said these hint to the Krkonoše, so their action on it seem fairly strange and rushed on acting on it and without knowing much on it that they have here for now in my view Find it odd, guess we will need additional exposition on the Krkonoše view and on how and why they act when they do it (and so why here they feel obliged to do that) and so what is the difference they have with what Glasir exposed on her view as they both fellow 'servant of the balance'


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