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New Beginnings - Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2024-10-29 00:18:06 +0000 UTC

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Duke of Coffee

Oh boy, Ash and Co incoming. Team Rocket is not far behind...

Austin Byrd

All great ideas. Your question from a few chapters back still rings in my head. Expansion! Expansion in the environments, in the orchard (love the special mixed tree growing now), in wild Pokemon who want to now stay, in a battling/strong team for defense and bragging rights, in more eggs, and of course evolutions. The nurse joy outpost is a great idea. Ethan turning his area into a super special place environmentally and through construction is very interesting. You’ve touched on a lot of different ways this story could go and they’re all good. And who says he can’t have everything lolol you’ve done good balancing it. He can focus on the ranch and love it and want to stay there, and also still later on take some of his battle-loving Pokemon on outtings to tournaments if you wanted to. Or have people or Pokemon start coming to the ranch and making trouble (once the ranch is attractive enough after you keep expanding it). So many options. I’m fine with whatever whether it’s Ethan going on trips or just hyper focusing on the ranch and having the world come to him. As long as he’s gaining in power, in any of the variety of ways you’ve set up, I’m here for the ride. The progress so far in the story so far has been great. Most stories that have a slice of life component end of falling flat because of it or getting absorbed by the slice of the life component. For me at least, slice of life is only interesting when there is still a solid progression component/outline going for the story. When it has it, then the slice of life parts become super interesting. But A lot of stories fall off because they let the SoL eat it up, or maybe get lazy of writing real chapters. I think you’ve got a good thing going here. Thank you and keep it up!!

Elo2Coon

How will the sirknights react to the venu of Tobias… Can’t wait to see (read).

Tyler Kimball

just wait till this chap gets posted to RoyalRoad. 3-5 typos appear out of thin air. :P Thanks for the catch.

Tsume Eiranis

thank you for the chapter :) Small typo: "It wield" <- should be "It wields..."

Daniel

Thank you for the chapter!!! Can’t wait to see the D-day meeting!

blueberrybutcher

great chap thanks a bunch!

JewBot9000

Tired Gremlin

Tyler Kimball

:)

Tyler Kimball

Thanks for reading and the support!

IV08004

Thank you

Tanner

Tftc!


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