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New Beginnings - Chapter 91

🕑 Added 2025-05-12 21:48:50 +0000 UTC

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KingFireWolf 20

Just felt more compressed than urgent honestly

Swinter

Definitively didn't like this one. Ethan comes across as some stupid helicopter mom. "I have a feeling" is such an annoying way of starting a call to action and only makes him seem neurotic. It's already been established that he's not psychic and more of a... Reverse empath. Radiating what He feels. It makes no sense that he'd suddenly have a psychic premonition that "something is wrong". Now I don't doubt that he's right. It is a story after all and the beat would tell me that yes, he is right. But that doesn't make the whole course of event any less stupid. Frankly, if you subvert my expectations here and the Smeargle is just "caught" over-indulging on Ice-cream somewhere, causing Ethan look like a Massive fool... I'd love it. It'd turn this chapter from a massive annoyance for me to something actually creative. It's one thing to know that when a child is missing, you should report it right away. But an adult Pokémon that has all that magical might being away a little longer than expected? Yeah as I wrote earlier. it just makes his actions feel neurotic. And isn't that the rub? Ethan is treating the Pokémon as children for... Some reason. So yeah, I'm critical. Make of it what you want. It's your story.


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