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Chapter IX: Packing heavy (Rewriten)

🕑 Added 2024-10-26 04:02:49 +0000 UTC

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MrLockwood

Wow. MC is such a scum. I want him to lose his unearned powers and face consequences of his actions. That would be fun.

Suika Nine

I think it would be a good idea if you added this context into this chapter before you release it on QQ. That way you will lessen the confusion from the readers over there.

Skrubstar

Comes off better yeah. Thank you for your work and the rewrite

allen 1996

I rewrote and deleted some parts of the chapter. Hope y’all like it more now

Easty

I think our MC cracked.

allen 1996

He never wished to kill Borros. If anything, it is the contrary more than anything else. The only ones he ever had wanted to fuck were Vhagar and Aemond. Borros doesn’t know that though and Monterys is profiting from it

ShinySpiritomb

Yeah, some of the monologuing comes off as a bit power-trippy and edgy. But being on meds explains it.

Jonathan Shaw

The internal monolog of this chapter is weird. It doesn't fit the tone of the other chapters.

rockus4

Why is he waiting to kill borros now. He didn't try kill Luke and just told them get out of his castle. Seems kinda odd that now he is threatening him

Rachel N

Lol that would explain some of the paragraphs... ❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣

allen 1996

I wrote this while on weird brain making meds or something. I hope it doesn’t show in the quality. Hope y’all like it


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