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[Commission]: (inspired inventor self insert in PJO) Rage against the heavens
🕑 Added 2024-11-01 03:02:52 +0000 UTCIn this new life, I found myself with an unexpected role: a little brother again. Only this time, there was a substantial age gap between me and my older sister, Beryl—a good twelve years separating us. But unlike any sibling bond I’d known in my past life, Beryl and I were close. Really close. Closer than I ever thought siblings could be.
Our parents weren’t negligent, but they didn’t really take care of me, not in the way a child would have probably wanted. Beryl was the one who became more like a mom than a sister to me. She’d fill in where our parents fell short, and in those early years, I wouldn’t lie and say that she wasn't my whole world.
When Beryl dropped out of college to chase her dream of becoming an actress, everything changed. Our parents were furious. They cut her off financially, refused to support her in any way, and even barred her from coming home unless she abandoned her dream. But I believed in her. I knew, in a way that went beyond logic, that she could make it. And I was in a unique position to help. With the knowledge I’d retained from my previous life, I started making investments in the late ‘70s and early ‘80s—just when I knew they’d be lucrative. By the time she needed a hand, I was able to provide for her, covering her apartment, her essentials, and anything else she might need. All so she could focus on her acting career without the constant worry of scraping by.
And she did. She proved me right.
The first big break came when she landed a role as the blonde lead on a popular TV show called Cheers. I remember the day she got the part. She waited outside my school, her face glowing with excitement. The moment she saw me, she practically tackled me in a hug, her voice high and breathless with joy.
“Thank you, Alex. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I don’t know what I would’ve done if I’d had to worry about being homeless or... or doing things I’d regret just to get by.” Her eyes were bright with unshed tears, and she grinned at me like she’d just conquered the world. “This changes everything. Trust me, little brother. We’re going to the top of the world.”
And for a time, it was perfect. Beryl’s show, one called Cheer where she had the role of the blonde female lead took off, gaining popularity across the country, and my investments were paying off, too. By the time I was a young teen, I was well on my way to being a millionaire before I even hit adulthood. And then, at her insistence, I moved in with her. Living together, we were more of a family than we’d ever been with our parents.
But then Lance entered our lives. He was that tall, imposing, and very muscular, with shoulder-length black hair and a grey-and-black neatly trimmed beard Greek guy.
I could see how he could have been deemed as handsome even with his resting bitch face that seemed to scream that he needed, deserved to be slapped.
Lance Reddick was... off. From the moment I met him, I felt an instinctive discomfort around him. It wasn’t jealousy—no, nothing as weird and lame as that. Beryl still gave me plenty of attention and I wasn’t the kind of person to go jealous because someone they cared about became close to someone else, even though she sometimes seemed to forget about me. For that one time, she left for a spontaneous vacation with Lance, locking me out of the apartment without telling me. I’d been fine, of course; I had my own money and it was my second life but I wouldn’t have been if it wasn’t the case and that was the problem. I said it to her of course, she apologized and told me she would be better but that incident was only the beginning of a string of times when Lance seemed to draw her further away from me.
It made me realize that something was wrong, that my sister was changing because of him and not in a good way and this was wrong because my sister was someone proud, someone who believed in herself, who would not let herself be cowed by the belief or the words or the actions of someone else or at least this is what I thought. Something in my heart, in my marrow, in my soul abhorred the existence that was Lance Reddick in a way I never had in my past life like in this current one. I didn't know why but I knew that he was bad news.
I tried talking to her about him, told her that something felt wrong. But she brushed me off, insisting I didn’t understand, that I would understand later in the future. Maybe she was right; maybe I didn’t understand her infatuation. But I knew what I saw.
Things came to a head when Beryl became pregnant. She was twenty-five, and I was only thirteen. I remember the day she told me, how my jaw dropped as I struggled to comprehend what she was saying. She was at the peak of her career, and she was willing to throw it all away for... for Lance? A man who ghosted her on a whim, leaving her devastated each time?
There were so many reasons why it was a bad idea. Firstly, it was the 80s, a time that was still socially regressive, one where a woman, a non-married one having a child with a quasi-absent father would be considered not too different from a prostitute.
More than that, having a child was an important and heavy responsibility. Raising one was something hard to do, raising one the right way even harder and with a father that went and came only when it pleased him? This was not a good idea at all.
Also, she was an actress. Being pregnant would make her unable to take on some acting gigs, make her career go to a ground still.
Those were a few of many reasons why having a child, a child with Lance Reddick wasn’t a good thing.
We argued, really argued for the first time. I tried to make her see reason, told her that a child wouldn’t keep Lance around if he didn’t want to stay. I had seen it so many times, through my personal life, through statistics, through social media. Having a child with a man didn't guarantee him staying, would most likely never be the reason why he changed.
It didn’t go well. Hurtful words were exchanged, and by the end, it was clear we couldn’t keep living under the same roof. She asked me to move out, back with our parents. I agreed, bitter and resentful, and we didn’t speak for the rest of her pregnancy. Weeks passed after her daughter, Thalia, was born before we finally saw each other again.
When Beryl came to visit at our parents’ house, it was like we were strangers. There were no apologies, no acknowledgement of the things we’d said. Instead, we talked about trivial things, pretending the hurt didn’t linger between us. We played with Thalia together, who was a curious, joyful baby with an insatiable curiosity for tugging at my hair.
Before she left, Beryl looked at me, her expression softened. “I’m doing my best, Alex. For all of us—me, you, and Thalia. Maybe you don’t understand now, but I hope you will someday.”
It wasn’t an apology, not really. But it was as close as she could get. And so I accepted it, letting the hurt settle into a quiet ache.
In time, I became Thalia’s unofficial babysitter. Beryl’s career kept her busy, and Lance was as unreliable as ever as I told her, like I knew he would be. The man vanished and reappeared without warning, leaving my sister in pieces each time. I took care of Thalia because someone had to, and despite the frustration, there was a part of me that found it almost nostalgic. I was, in a way, repaying Beryl for the care she’d given me when we were younger.
But it wasn’t easy watching her crumble. Lance’s influence left her stressed, anxious, and sometimes driven to drink. She’d drown her sorrows in bottles of wine, and I’d be left to clean up the mess, clearing away the empty bottles so that Thalia wouldn’t hurt herself. Beryl wasn’t the sister I remembered; she was a ghost of herself, hollowed out by her devotion to a man who only ever brought her misery and the worst was that I couldn’t understand why, I couldn’t understand how this girl who had been more responsible than our parents when we were younger, who gave me the utmost care couldn’t do the same thing with her biological daughter.
Yet despite everything, Thalia thrived. She grew up happy and healthy, a spirited child with a vivid imagination and a knack for getting into trouble. She struggled with ADHD and dyslexia, but I made sure she knew those things didn’t define her. I wanted her to know, to engrave in her mind like a gospel that she was perfect just the way she was.
Slowly, Beryl began to pull herself together. Lance had ghosted her again, this time for a year, and in his absence, she started to return to the sister I once knew. She found new acting gigs—not as grand as they could have been if she hadn’t put her career on hold, but enough to give her purpose again. She even started to take her role as a mother more seriously. I hoped that, with time, Thalia might act and look at her with something other than anger and despise then one day, Lance came back. And it was like all her progress disappeared in an instant.
I begged her not to go back to him. I pleaded, told her that if she chose him over us again, I’d be done. I wouldn’t forgive her, wouldn’t talk to her. She had a choice—me and Thalia or Lance.
She chose him. I should have expected it but it still did hurt.
She told me it would be better if we didn’t see each other anymore. She didn’t want me “putting bad thoughts” in Thalia’s mind about her father. The betrayal burned, but I wasn’t ready to give up just yet. I went to confront Lance directly, hoping to reason with him or, at the very least, make him see the damage he was doing. But what happened next... it’s hazy in my memory. The details blur, but I remember one thing clearly: I was served with a restraining order, barring me from coming near Beryl or Thalia, as if I were some kind of ticking sexual predator. It's as if the moment the guy had acted, the entire justice system has bent to his whims. I literally had millions, the best lawyers, teams of investigators launched in his direction and so many other things and those things weren’t enough to change anything.
Lance won and the thought burned like hot iron on the flesh.
The look on Beryl’s face when I saw her in court—guilty, yet silent—was the final straw. I left without looking back.
I left after putting Thalia to bed, I left lying to her that we would see each other again. I could remember how she had asked me if I would always be there. I had lied to her and said always. This was the last time I saw my niece.
For the next few years, I lived for myself. I was wealthy, young, and unburdened for the first time in my life. I tried to forget Beryl and Thalia, focusing on enjoying the second chance this life had given me.
And then, one Monday at 2:30 AM, someone banged on my door.
At first, I thought it was a robber, but then I heard my name, shouted in a voice I hadn’t heard in years. It was a voice I’d almost succeeded in forgetting, one that brought with it a storm of anger and nostalgia. Beryl.
Part of me didn’t want to answer. She had never been there for me, not when I needed her. But something in her voice—a desperation I’d never heard before—compelled me. I opened the door.
She looked like a mess. Her face was gaunt, her eyes red and swollen. She looked broken. I wouldn’t know who was the first of us to move, who had craved comfort from the other the most but in the end, I was hugging my sister while she was crying in my arms.
I held her in my arms as her sobs broke through the silence of the night, each shuddering breath filling the room with a kind of grief that felt older than time itself. Her words came out in broken, trembling whispers, "I’m sorry, Alex... I’m so, so sorry, Alex... you were right, I’m so sorry..." She kept repeating it, the weight of her remorse hanging heavily in the air, almost suffocating.
Beryl’s tears seemed endless, a torrent of regret and sorrow, and I found myself struggling to keep my composure. I'd seen her so many ways over the years – strong, vulnerable, radiant, bitter – but never like this, utterly shattered, like she’d been hollowed out by the very secrets she was revealing.
"Alex," she whispered again, her voice raw and torn. "You have to believe me. Lance... he wasn’t... he wasn’t normal. I wouldn’t have given up so much... sacrificed so much... if he was just a man." She clutched my shirt like it was the only thing keeping her anchored to reality. "You think I would have stayed, would have... turned my back on you... on everything, for some ordinary man?" Her voice cracked, her face twisted in a mixture of desperation and dread. "It sounds insane, I know. But, Alex... gods... the gods from the stories, the myths... they're real. All of them. They’re real."
When I was younger, she had liked to read me stories, stories to make me sleep she said, stories that ended most of the time with her being the one sleeping, stories about Greek gods and heroes, stories about Greek legends.
I had thought they were myths, things with no basis in truth just like in my past life. It seemed I was wrong.
The room seemed to shrink to my senses, my mind replaying her words, the gods were real, I had woken up in another world with living gods.
Beryl was looking at me, her eyes wild with a need that went beyond explanation. It was as if she believed my faith in her was the only thing keeping her from falling into a bottomless pit. And somehow, I knew that if I didn’t believe her, she might just break entirely.
I would have doubted her – I should have doubted her – if it weren't for the fact that this was my second life. The quiet, dark secret I'd carried with me since I was a child, the one that made me question everything I thought I knew about the world, came crashing into my thoughts. When I was younger, I'd wondered if this world was different, supernatural somehow, but the fact that everything seemed so painfully familiar had forced me to let that notion go. It was the seventies, not 2000, but still... I was sure I was in the same mundane world I'd always known. But now? Now, I was beginning to think I'd been terribly wrong.
And worse, I feared I knew what world I’d reincarnated into – the world of Percy Jackson. My mind raced as pieces fell into place, each one heavier and darker than the last. A world where gods walked unseen among mortals, where children carried the burden of heroism, facing monsters with only their wits and stolen moments of bravery. The gods were no saviors here. They were cruel and distant, their immortal lives devoid of compassion for their own children, leaving them to fend for themselves against beasts that lurked in shadows and under beds.
Many would think that I should have known that something was wrong, that maybe I had indeed reincarnated into the world of Percy Jackson with my older sister being literally called Beryl but Beryl Grace was in my defence not her entire name. Grace wasn’t our family name. Grace was her career name. Beryl’s true name was literally Beryl Gracelyn Chambers. Our family name was literally Chambers. How was I supposed to know otherwise?
I recalled all the failures of the gods, every sin they’d inflicted upon their demigod children. Chris Rodriguez unclaimed while living in the Hermes’ cabin. The supposed protectors of humanity who turned their backs on their own flesh and blood, for no reason other than selfish indifference. Poseidon, unconcerned with Percy’s fate until it suits him, until he needs him but the guy doesn't care and does nothing when his son has a stepfather that was more than implied to be abusive. Classical Poseidon wouldn’t even spit on him even If he was on fire. Even Athena, casting away her offsprings like discarded chess pieces until she deemed them useful enough, good enough to go on a quest for her pride, a quest that was happening and had been failed for thousands of years. She was literally doing the same abominable thing, sending her children to die for a statue for more than a millennium, a quest that not any one of them had survived until Annabeth and Annabeth had been lucky.
This was a world wrapped in tragedy, but no one saw it. People held onto the idea of heroes, of valor, but how many lives had been ruined, children forced to beg for acknowledgement from parents who never cared enough to stay? This was a grimdark world that just didn’t seem like one because in which world was it fair for children to beg to be claimed, acknowledged, not even taken care of by their literal godly immortal parents, how was this fair for children since childhood to have to deal with literal monsters, monsters that wanted and did kill them, eat them alive, make them suffer. And even more horrifying – a world where every advancement, every bit of human ingenuity, was merely a reflection of the gods’ influence, like shadows cast on the walls of Plato’s cave. Western civilization itself was just an extension of their whims, their endless play with mortals. The thought turned my stomach.
Destroying the gods would bring ruin, the PJO books had informed. Doing so would impact humanity in more than a negative way because the truth that no one in his past life had seemed to grasp was the fact that the gods were Parasites.
This world was one where every human advancement came directly and/or indirectly from the gods. The gods were the Western civilisation itself and all the changes good and bad it brought to the world. This was why if I remembered well, the books had said that destroying the gods and thrones would send back all of humanity living back into caves.
This meant that the humanity of this world depended on the gods and I hated that idea, hated the idea that heroes, that people who followed their dreams, who died, killed, suffered for them were only able to do so because of the gods whether it was directly or indirectly. I hated that idea, I hated that fact because I came from a world where humanity made all the same things present in this world without any god. I hated what they did to this humanity. I hated the thought that every possible achievement born of the human defiance, of the human will of living, of bettering his life was only because of monsters in all but name and one of those monsters, the greatest of them was the sperm donor of my niece.
Th. Thalia... Thalia would face monsters, come inches from death, all because of her father's grudge, something she’d never had any part in. My breath grew shallow as the implications unravelled inside me. Thalia wasn’t safe, and neither were any of us. But as I fought to contain the storm within, Beryl’s voice broke through my spiralling thoughts.
"He promised me so much, Alex," she murmured, almost as if in a trance. "He said... he said he'd give me the world. That he'd make me a queen, like he’d done for his lovers before. He even promised... he promised immortality, Alex. For me, for my children... for you."
I held back the surge of anger as I listened, Beryl’s words scraping against the rawness of everything she'd given up. "I was going to bring you with me, Alex. I promised I would." She looked at me, her tear-streaked face twisted with regret. "I thought... I thought he meant it. I thought all of this was worth it. I ignored you, hurt you, gave up on my career, because I believed in him, in us."
She laughed, a hollow sound that held nothing of joy. "When Thalia was born, he seemed to care, you know? I thought... I thought I'd made the right choice, that you’d forgive me, understand, once we all were immortal. But every time I reminded him, reminded him of his promises... he’d leave for days, weeks... months. And when he returned, he was different. Each time, he seemed to care less. And that's when the bottle became my comfort... when I should have been comforting Thalia. When I... I was weak, Alex. But you... you were there for her. You took care of her when I couldn't."
She looked at me, a strange mix of admiration and shame in her gaze. "You proved, again and again, that you were better than me."
My heart twisted painfully as she spoke. She’d tried to let go of him, to pull herself out of the darkness. But every time, he would return, whispering promises that wrapped around her like chains. "He promised me, Alex, on the Styx itself, that he’d make me a queen," she whispered, almost in reverence. "That he wasn’t lying. But you... you threatened to leave... and even though it hurt, I stayed silent."
"Why didn’t you tell me, Beryl?" My voice was barely a whisper, afraid to disturb the fragile quiet that had settled between us.
"Lance said... he said that knowing would put you in danger. That it’d attract monsters, that he wouldn’t protect you like he did Thalia and me." Her voice dropped to a trembling murmur. "He didn’t like you, Alex. He hated that Thalia called you 'Dad'... that she chose you over him. That’s why..."
It dawned on me, like a cold blade pressed to my spine. I’d made Zeus jealous. I’d challenged a god’s pride without even knowing it. And the memory that felt hazy – the one where I’d somehow asked for Thalia’s guardianship – must have been altered, twisted by Zeus himself to keep me from remembering.
My memories had been altered. He had controlled my mind and there had been nothing that I had been able to do. The fucker had violated me and I hadn’t been able to do anything and this more than anything burnt.
The worst was that I knew I could do nothing that would make him pay for everything he did. Stories about overthrowing, fighting against gods sound cool when you’re able to tank a blast akin to thousands of hydrogen bombs from the Master Bolt, not when you're an average human.
The truth was that even though I hated him, I couldn’t forget the fact that beings like him were called gods for a reason, that beings like him wiped lineages, directly or indirectly were the cause of the downfall of probably hundreds of millions if not more.
Why would a lone average human be able to do against a creature capable of controlling the sky itself, of uprooting mountains with pure physical strength?
This is why I could understand Luke’s decision of siding with the Titans not that it wasn’t stupid. Understandable indeed but still stupid because the original myths, the PJO books, they all indicated one thing, only the godly, only the immortal could take down the immortal.
Beryl’s voice wavered, barely audible. "There was... another child, Alex. I wanted to name him after you... Alexis, but he wouldn’t have it. He named him Jason, to appease his wife. And then... then he offered Jason to her, sacrificed him to keep her satisfied. No matter how much I begged, he wouldn’t listen."
Jason, her boy, my nephew, a boy who would literally be thrown to the wolves, who would literally become a child soldier, a nephew who would die alone not long after being heartbroken. How was any of this right? How was any of this acceptable?
The emptiness in her eyes spoke volumes. She’d been promised the world, only to be thrown away like a pawn. "I told him he shouldn’t... that he’d promised me to make me a Queen and he laughed. He looked at me and said, What else could you call a mortal woman who bore the king of the gods’ child?”
I could almost hear it as if I had been present, dismissive, uncaring, cruel.
“That’s when,” my sister continued “I knew... I knew I’d been used, tricked... that he never intended to keep his promises. Everything I had done, everything I had given up was for nothing. I was… just a toy, a toy he got bored of after the novelty passed. You were right Alex."
“Where is Thalia?” I asked, my voice barely a whisper, even though I already knew the answer. She was gone, out there, alone in a world that didn’t care.
Beryl’s shoulders shook, and she clung to me like I was the only solid thing in her broken world. "She left... she’s gone. And I don’t want you to leave me too, Alex. You’re all I have left.”
I swallowed hard, feeling the sting of bile in my throat. Beryl had been left with nothing, her career gone, her dignity shredded, her daughter resenting her so much to the point that she ran from home.
I was the only thing she had left, the only one who possibly still cared about her. I didn't remember it exactly but in the books, Thalia hated everything about her, hated her more than she did Zeus who was the true reason for everything wrong that went on in her life but that should be expected, weren’t daughters the first ones to despise their mothers after their fathers when they were in fact looking into a broken view of the could be?
Now, after everything she had told me, I could understand so much more about the way she acted, everything she had said, everything she had done.
‘We’re going to the top of the world.’
This sentence had been the beginning of everything wrong, the curse that infected the roots. I wonder, in another world, one without me existing, one where she wouldn’t have the support of a brother to stop her from going homeless, to stop her from losing her soul by doing what she needed to do to grasp at her dream, I wonder if in this world, if in canon, the thing that was the beginning of her fall was her thinking ‘i’m going to the top of this world.’
I was her brother, probably the only one still willing to hold her through the pieces of a life that had been taken, crumbled into dust. I wonder, if I hadn’t opened this door, would I have woken up with the news that I lost my sister, that her fate had been unchanged from canon, that worse, it happened earlier?
All of this was Zeus’ fault. Zeus was the reason why my sister was crying. Zeus was the reason why my nephew would be groomed into a child soldier. Zeus would be the reason why Thalia would be homeless for two years, who would be the reason why she faced the worst monsters of the Underworld at twelve and do nothing to help when he could have, who would turn her into a fucking tree! Thalia who… Thalia who still was alive, Thalia who still could be saved, Thalia who I could bring home. I didn't care that it could be dangerous, that it could fail, that it could end with the attention of Zeus and the other gods on me, that I could die or worse.
This was a second life, my second life. What was the point of living again, of being able to do something worthwhile and do nothing?
I didn't care that Fate was a tangible thing in this world. I didn't care about the Destiny, the canon set in place by the Daughter of Ananke. I didn't care that I was merely a human in this mad world of gods, heroes and monsters.
The loom of Fate, the one that had preordained the suffering of my family. I will destroy it until there is nothing left, I will crush it and all those who try to stop me.
The Gods of Below and Above, the Underworld, the Seas, the heavens, they won’t stop me.
I tightened my arms around her, every word she said fueling the fire simmering inside me. Zeus, his promises, his lies, that had and would cost my sister everything.
I would rage against the heavens until that Yoke that gods had on humans, that power that allowed them so much cruelty, that could allow them to ruin the lives of mortals like my sister would be worthless.
At that moment, something happened almost like a recognition, almost like a baptism, almost like enlightenment.
At that moment, infinity seared itself and bloomed into my mind, a sephiroth of potential with stars at the places of branches taking root.
One of those stars shone almost eager, almost alive, almost screaming for change.
‘Shape me,’ it seemed to whisper and I did. I shaped, my mind twisting, giving it form, giving it direction and making it go supernova overwhelming my mind with what my heart had desired, knowledge, knowledge on how to create anti-godly weapons.
It was just novice-level knowledge a part of me was sure of. This same part almost seems to say that with time, it could become more.
Even then, even though it was only a level of knowledge that could only be called level entry, it was still enough to make me able to do something. I knew that with costly things like gold, diamonds and high-level batteries, I could create something that would mask a human or a location If I had enough resources from the gods themselves.
What made it primordial though was that it wouldn’t only work on the gods. It would If I desired it to do so also work I was sure on beings classes below them in power and strength which meant that I knew how to create a place or even objects that would hide the scents of a demigod, that would ensure that they wouldn’t have to fear monsters coming after them. It meant that I could save my niece, ensure that she is and feels safe and all of this was possible just with one charge.
What else would I be able to do with another?
Zeus had brought pain to Thalia, to Beryl, and fucked with my memory, with me. So many other mortals had and were actually suffering in the entire human history, in the entire world because of the gods. The gods had meddled in mortal lives for too long, crushing us underfoot as they pursued their whims.
It was time for humanity to fight back. It was time for mankind to rage against the heavens.
Comments
Aaron Seddon
i need more of this its a great start
XIEREN
Let’s kill ourselves a god !
Matteo Paun
This story is really interesting you should definitely continue it
Lictor Magnus
So I like the overall premise, but I don’t get how he made his money at such a young age. What kind of funds would he have access to as a 10 year old? He wouldn’t even be able to have an account on his own, it would have to be in his parents care. It would make more sense if they were twins or he was the older sibling.
KingDracula
1000% needs a continuation. It's too peak to be left as a snippet.
Psyren1596
Watched!
Jose Matos
It isn’t only zeus fault, she is at fault too unless there was some mind control or manipulation.
Jose Matos
I want more of this story.
ShinySpiritomb
This shit fire. Now burn Olympus to the ground.
Antonio Adams
Let's just agree to disagree, it too early in the morning to read all that
Skrubstar
I think saying "She's an Adult and made her own choices" is a bit context blind to what happened, and what it means to be manipulated and taken advantage of, especially since Beryl lacks a lot of the experience, support group, and access to information (No internet, 70's/80's) that it would take to identify it as such. Zeus has all the hallmarks of an abusive relationship, most notably what happens once there's a massive power dynamic at play. Reading between the lines a little, he shattered her sense of self worth, to say nothing of the very implicit threat that Zeus represents. "You should be glad I'm ONLY making him lose the custody case and I won't be as kind next time" absolutely sounds like something Zeus would say. She's functionally protecting him in the best way she can, which is trying to keep the "meddling mortal" as far away from Zeus as possible, because they have literally no power in this situation. There's also a a lot of Mind Control read flags going off. The Mist is well established in PJO, and even without it, Zeus very much so seems like he could have the power to manipulate the will of a mortal. The line where she describes his promises also sticks out, as Beryl's described as "almost as if in a trance". Yes she was promised power, and she SAYS she did it of her own volition, but knowing Zeus, do you really think he's above "smoothing" worries or doubts? If people "keep falling for the same trick", but the person in question has established mind control powers, are they really all so naive and arrogant to ignore history, or is the common in denominator in Zeus influencing their decisions? Trusting someone to not use mind control is a matter of trust, and in this regard, Zeus deserves absolutely none of it. Ultimately, I feel that saying "It was her own choice" and only that ignores a lot of the context behind the situation, as well as how at the end of the day, she's a victim of Zeus. The MC feels furious at what the Zeus did to his sister, but Beryl had all of that happen TO her. Beryl's got some soul searching to do, and apologies to make, but I personally don't feel as if she's so far gone as to feel no sympathy for her situation. She was clearly feeling anxiety, guilt, and regret throughout the entire "relationship", and wanted to eventually "make it up" to him, which really doesn't scream, "Reckless pursuit of power and only feeling regret because it didn't work out" to me, where is more so where I'd drawn the line of not feeling sympathy.
Skrubstar
Ahh, Inspired Inventor to overturn the heavens themselves, good times.
Nisiris
Yeees, would gladly support more of this of my favorite author! Finally fic where mortals would go fuck yeah against God's and titans!
Zenith
Well damn we are in for a treat revenge storys are my guilty pleasure, for the love all dont sop this I NEED to see how he kills the Gods Bonus points did you know that hestia could have stoped the other gods from doing all that shit in mythologie and didnt, food for thoughts. in fact i would be gratefull if you could that make a plotline for hestias punishment that she has to see the death of her siblings and life afterwards >:)
Suika Nine
Man, I really want to see the MC bring retribution to the gods. Zeus and the Olympians fucked with the wrong mortal and its time they get their just deserts. How often will you update this btw? Edit after reading update on health: No pressure. And I hope you get better.
Arsylvos
Please don't stop this i beg of you, I need to see him Create wonders and horrors that make that God's mortal, I am so invested in this after one chapter please continue.
Antonio Adams
Yes but regardless it was her choices that led her here. Despite the one person she had to trust growing up warning and advising against she turned her back on him with out hesitation for promises of power and wealth, she may have wanted to come back for him eventually but it doesn't change the fact that she chose power over her brother. Zeus may have been manipulating her but she's an adult, the mere fact that she didn't even try to defend or protect him shows where she stood. She herself said she did it of her own will because of his promise. He didnt make her give up her career or her relationship with her brother that was all her because she thought that ends justified the means. She thought she could eventually make it up to him only for the very obvious outcome to happen. While Zeus taking advantage of her is wrong of him we can't forget that it was her choices that led to this in the end
Based_Bass
Now that’s a hell of a first chapter. Also great explanation for why he didn’t recognize who his sister was or the world he was in. Very believable from both a third party stance and for why Beryl had a different career name. Hope to see more of this soon.
arydr
Love the chapter. Can't wait to see more. Maybe Introduce the other pantheons found in the Riordanverse as well?
Jack
Dude it's clear to see that Zeus was taking advantage and manipulating her for his own sick pleasure yess Beryl made bad choices but Zeus was the devil on her shoulder taking advantage of her.
Jack
Ok that is pretty damn interesting I can't wait to see how Alex is gonna beat Zeus I hope their showdown is spectacular.
Antonio Adams
Love the story hope to read more chapters
Antonio Adams
Not gonna lie, Beryl got what she deserved. She threw everything and everyone away for the empty promises of a man widely and infamously known to use women and abandon them. Everything that happened is her own fault and doing. I can't feel even the slightest bit of sympathy for her
