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Slaves obey, men choose: chapter: chapter 31: Anima ignis
🕑 Added 2025-12-03 00:46:02 +0000 UTCI was supposed to write but I can not think coherently anymore. Saw the results of the vote and tried to gobble that in turn. Hope y’all like it.
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The day had arrived.
I stood at the edge of the Great Plaza and watched hundreds of thousands of souls gather before me like storm clouds assembling on a horizon. My stomach twisted itself into knots I couldn't name. Excitement, perhaps. Or terror. Probably both, married together in some unholy union that made my hands shake if I didn't keep them perfectly still.
They were here to begin the election, the vote of the executive. To choose someone who would hold, after me, the executive power in Astapor.
The legislative power already existed, fragile as new ice over water. Representatives chosen by what we'd come to call 'castes', though I hated the word, hated what it implied, sat in their makeshift assembly halls. Former field slaves had their voices. Former household slaves had theirs. The artisans, the teachers we were training, the Unsullied who'd chosen to stay and protect rather than conquer: all had their representatives drawn from geography and old bondage both. A patchwork government stitched from necessity and hope in equal measure.
But executive power? That still rested completely in my hands like a burning coal I couldn't set down.
If I were honest, and standing before hundreds of thousand of people felt like the wrong time to start lying to myself, I would have fucked off somewhere peaceful the moment the last master's body cooled.
Some beach, maybe.
Somewhere the sand probably didn't remember blood.
Somewhere I could sleep without ever dreaming of Kraznys's hands on the original Aegor’s skin, on my skin or the weight of chains I'd never physically worn but remembered with perfect, hideous clarity.
Unfortunately for my fantasy of peace, I wasn't a fool.
If I'd left them then, disappeared into whatever comfortable exile I could carve from this vicious world, tens of thousands would have died at least.
I knew this the way I knew my own name, with the certainty of prophecy and bitter experience.
The ex-slaves would have torn each other apart fighting over the finite resources that remained after we burned the old order to ash.
Food.
Water.
Without The healing tree that I'd pulled from the earth like a splinter from a god's palm, they would have killed each other for the right to eat, to drink, to heal.
And if they hadn't destroyed themselves, the other slave cities would have done it for them.
Yunkai.
Meereen.
New Ghis and Mantarys and every other cesspit that called bondage civilization would have seen Astapor's chaos and thought: Opportunity.
They would have come with chains and soldiers and put the collars back on necks still raw from their absence.
Those things didn't happen because I stayed.
Because I accepted their demands that I lead, that I decide, that I become what I'd promised myself I'd never be: necessary.
I used my power to raise homes from the red brick that gave this city its colour and its shame.
Not hovels.
Not the crumbling ruins the masters had stuffed their slaves into like grain sacks in a too-small storehouse.
Real homes.
Comfortable ones.
Homes with windows that let in light and doors that locked from the inside, that last part mattered more than most understood.
Privacy was a revolutionary concept when you'd spent your life as property.
I'd built them dwellings that would make the royals of Westeros weep with envy, all vaulted ceilings and cool stone that remembered how to keep out heat without trapping misery.
And the golden apples.
God, the apples.
The panaceas.
I'd pulled the tree by using the incredible capabilities given to my archmage essence. The fruit hung heavy on branches that should have broken under their weight but never did.
Like some of my citizens like to say “Eat one and watch sickness flee your body like rats from a burning ship.”
Scars faded. Missing teeth grew back. Blindness cleared. Deafness lifted. The population of Astapor transformed, from walking corpses haunting the edge of madness and cannibalism to... to people who looked like people. Beautiful people. Healthy people. Ten-out-of-ten supermodels, as some distant part of my mind that still remembered another world might have said.
The other slave cities didn't attack us because they feared me.
Simple as that.
Some of them might have doubted before, whispered that my power was exaggerated, that the destruction of the pyramids had been trickery or luck.
Not anymore.
Now they knew what I suspected they'd all come to understand in their bones: I could raze each and every one of them in a blink.
Reduce their cities to glass and memory. There was nothing they could do to stop me.
The only reason I hadn't already was because I didn't want to kill the innocent slaves trapped in their walls.
They probably didn't know, the masters in their distant pyramids, counting their gold and their flesh, but that was the real chain on my power.
The Dothraki had been different.
The Dothraki culture had been... I'd erased it.
Not just defeated it.
Erased it.
Killed the Great Stallion, their god, along with every screaming warrior who'd thought rape and pillage were rights granted by the universe itself.
I'd been the reason they died.
All of them.
Thousands upon thousands.
The memory tasted like copper and ash and worse, felt fresh.
I didn't want to add more bodies to that count if I could avoid it.
Didn't want to stack more ghosts behind my eyes when I tried to sleep.
Still.
My presence was necessary, but that didn't mean I wanted to own them.
Didn't mean I wanted them to remain children waiting for father to tell them what to think, what to believe, what to become.
I wanted them to have independence, to be able to choose like men, like people, and not simply obey what had been beaten into them across lifetimes of bondage.
I didn't want them choosing me because I looked like a god to eyes that had only ever seen masters.
I didn't want to hold a chain.
I never had.
That was the whole fucking point, wasn't it?
I broke chains.
I didn't forge new ones, even if they were made of gratitude and worship instead of iron.
But necessity was its own kind of bondage, and here I was.
So I'd made this compromise with fate: they would choose someone to share this burden.
Someone they selected, not someone I appointed.
They would act free even if freedom was still a language they were learning to speak.
They would make a choice about their future, about what kind of city they wanted to build from the ruins of what I'd burned down.
This was why I stood before them now, hundreds of thousands of former slaves packed into a plaza that still smelled like blood if the wind blew wrong.
I raised my hands. The crowd quieted like wind dying before a storm.
"I want to tell you a story," I said. My voice carried, not shouting, but something in my magic made the words reach every ear. "It's not a happy story. But it's true, and truth matters more than comfort."
I let the silence hang for a moment, watched faces lean forward with hunger for words that weren't commands.
"Once, there was a man who lived in a cage. The cage was small, so small he couldn't stand, couldn't stretch, could barely breathe. He'd been born there. His mother had died giving birth between those bars, and he'd never known anything except that iron box and the sky he could see through the gaps.
"Every day, his master would come and slide food through a slot. Scraps, mostly. Just enough to keep him alive. And every day, the man would eat what he was given and thank his master for the kindness, because he didn't know that people could eat anything else. He thought the cage was the world, and the scraps were all there was to have.
"Years passed. Decades. The man grew old in his cage, his bones bent by the metal, his mind bent by the years. He was so old that his teeth had fallen out, and so tired that he barely remembered what it felt like to want anything except the next handful of scraps.
"Then, one night, something changed. His master died, drunk himself to death on wine the caged man had never tasted. No one came to bring the scraps. The man waited, patient as stone, for someone to remember him. Days passed. He grew hungry, then starving, then desperate.
"In his desperation, he pushed against the cage door.
"It swung open. It had never been locked. Not once, in all those years. His master had simply... never told him. Had let him believe the cage was sealed, and the man had never thought to test it.
"He crawled out, his body barely remembered how to move, and found himself in a house full of food. Bread and fruit and meat, all of it just sitting there, free for the taking. He could have eaten his fill. Could have walked out the door and found the wider world waiting.
"But he didn't.
"He crawled back into his cage and waited for someone to come and tell him what to do next. He waited until he died, because freedom without knowing what it meant was more terrifying than bondage he understood."
I stopped. Let them sit with that. Watched recognition dawn on some faces like sunrise, watched others frown in confusion or denial.
"I'm not your master," I said quietly. "I broke the cages. I killed the men who put you in them. But standing outside the cage isn't the same as knowing what to do with the sky above your head. You've been eating scraps your whole lives, literal and otherwise. Now there's bread on the table, and the door is open, and I'm telling you: you can walk through it.
"But you have to choose to walk. You have to choose what to do with your legs once they remember how to move. No one can do that for you. Not me. Not anyone."
I paused, let my gaze sweep across the crowd like wind over wheat.
"The man in the story died because he waited for permission to live. Don't be him. Don't crawl back into cages just because the world is too big and too strange. Yes, you'll make mistakes. Yes, you'll stumble. You'll probably fall on your face more than once. But a man who falls while walking forward is still moving, still living, still choosing. A man who stays in his cage is already dead, he just hasn't stopped breathing yet."
Silence held the plaza like water in cupped hands.
"Some of you will choose well in the vote," I continued. "Some of you will choose poorly. That's what choosing means, the possibility of being wrong. But even a bad choice made freely is worth more than a good decision someone else made for you. Because the bad choice is yours. You live with it. You learn from it. You become something more than property that nods and obeys and waits for the next command."
I felt my throat tighten. Pushed through it.
"I was like the man in the cage once. I waited for permission to exist. I thought my only purpose was to make other people comfortable, no matter what it cost me. And then I died, truly died, and came back, and I decided that I would never ask permission again. Never wait for someone to tell me I was allowed to be human.
"I want that for you. All of you. The right to be wrong. The right to argue and disagree and make terrible mistakes that you'll regret for years. Because that's what free people do. They stumble around and crash into each other and somehow build something worth having anyway."
"Today marks the beginning of your election. You will choose someone to hold executive power in this city, someone who will share the burden of decision-making that's been mine alone until now. Not because I want to be rid of it, though I won't lie and say I don't sometimes wish I could leave. But because you deserve to choose your own future, even if that future is uncertain."
I snapped my fingers.
Fire erupted beside me, a column of flame that twisted itself into a massive brazier, bronze and gold and burning with light that didn't produce heat. The magical fire danced inside it like trapped sunlight, beautiful and strange and utterly unnatural.
The crowd gasped. Some fell back. Others leaned forward, hungry for miracles.
"This brazier will serve two purposes," I said, gesturing to the flame. "First, it will count your votes through the magic that makes it. When you cast your choice, we'll discuss how in a moment, the fire will know. It will tally and remember. No one can cheat it. No one can trick it. The magic answers to truth, not desire.”
"Second, when the executive has been chosen, when enough of you have spoken clearly enough that there's no doubt who should serve, the brazier will extinguish itself. You'll know the election is over when the flame dies. Until then, it burns."
I let them look at it, this impossible thing I'd conjured like pulling silk from air.
"But before voting can begin, we need candidates. For someone to stand for election, they must have proof that at least five thousand people support them. That could be signatures, we've been teaching enough of you to write your names. It could be marks, if you can't write yet. It could be witnesses who'll swear before the fire that they want this person to lead. The form doesn't matter. The number does. Five thousand."
Murmurs rippled through the crowd like wind through grass.
"Five thousand because this is serious. Because executive power means making decisions that will affect everyone, and I won't have someone stand who can only convince their drinking friends to support them. If you can't find five thousand people who think you should lead, you shouldn't lead. Simple as that."
I folded my arms, studied them.
"Only when candidates have been confirmed, when they've proven they have real support, will the true election begin. Then everyone votes. Everyone. You choose who you trust with power, and the brazier counts those choices, and when one person has enough support to lead without question, the fire goes out. And we have our executive."
The weight of what I was asking settled over them like snow.
"I need you to understand something," I said, and my voice dropped, became something more intimate despite the thousands listening. "This isn't a game. This isn't practice. This is real. The person you choose will help make the decisions about food distribution. About how we defend ourselves if, when, the other cities attack. About how we welcome refugees or turn them away. About justice and punishment and mercy and all the complicated, messy things that make up actual governance.
"Choose well. Not perfectly, there's no such thing. But well. Choose someone you believe will better Astapor, not just someone who promises you comfort or tells you what you want to hear. Choose because it's right, not because it's easy. Choose because you've thought about it, weighed it, discussed it with your neighbors and friends and rivals."
I could see the fear in some faces. The hunger in others. Anger, confusion, hope, all of it mixed together like paint that hadn't quite blended yet.
"Some of you are relieved right now," I said, reading the crowd like text. "You're thinking: finally, someone else will make the hard choices. I can stop worrying. That's fine. That's human. But don't check out completely. Don't hand over your voice just because speaking is hard. The executive needs to know what you think, what you need, what you fear. Otherwise they're just another master, and we didn't burn the pyramids for that."
My eyes found the faces that looked terrified.
"Some of you are scared. You're thinking: what if we choose wrong? What if the person we elect is worse than the masters? What if we doom ourselves? I understand that fear. I live with it. But let me tell you something, the masters weren't elected. They were born into power, and they kept it through violence and tradition and the lie that they deserved it just by existing. You can unmake what you make. If your executive fails you, you can choose again. That's the difference. That's why this matters."
And there were the angry ones. I saw them too.
"Some of you are angry. You're thinking: why should we have to choose? Why can't Aegor just fix everything? He has the power. Let him use it. And you're right, I have the power. I could make every decision for you. I could rule with absolute authority and probably keep you safe and fed and relatively happy. But then what are you? What have you become except my property? I don't want slaves. I want citizens. I want people who argue with me when I'm wrong and tell me to fuck off when I overstep. I want you to be fully, messily, annoyingly human. And that means you choose."
Silence again. The kind that meant they were actually listening.
"The future is yours now," I said, and felt the truth of it settle in my chest like a stone. "It depends on your choices, all of them, not just this vote. Every decision you make from now on shapes what Astapor becomes. Will it be a place where former slaves help each other build something new? Or will it be a place where you turn on each other the moment I'm not looking? Will you be generous with refugees who need what you once needed? Or will you bar the gates and hoard your safety?"
I spread my hands, palms up, like offering something fragile.
"I don't know. I don't know what you'll choose or who you'll become. That's what terrifies me and gives me hope in equal measure. You're unknown. You're possibility. You're free."
The brazier crackled beside me, flame dancing like trapped starlight.
"May the result of your choices be something we don't regret," I said. "May you build something worth the blood it cost to get here. May you be kinder to each other than the world has been to you."
I stepped back from the edge of the platform. Hundreds of thousand of people stared at me like I held answers I couldn't give them.
"The nomination period begins now," I said. "Find your candidates. Convince your neighbors. Argue and persuade and think. You have time. The fire will burn until you're ready."
Then I did something that felt St thus moment more freeing than anything else: I walked away. Didn't fly, didn't disappear in a show of magic. Just walked down the steps like any man might, through the crowd that parted before me like water around stone.
Behind me, the brazier burned. Before me, fifty thousand freed slaves began to murmur and argue and choose.
I didn't look back. Couldn't afford to. If I looked back, I might see them failing. Or worse, I might see them succeeding
Both possibilities felt like drowning and breathing for the first time.
