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Slaves obey, men choose: chapter 33: Kindling
🕑 Added 2025-12-15 00:30:53 +0000 UTCThe magic settled over my skin like a second shadow.
Not invisibility, that would be crude.
What I wove using magic was subtler: a deflection woven from light and will, a suggestion written into the world itself that I wasn't worth noticing.
The spell bent attention away like water around stone.
Eyes would slide past.
Minds would forget to question.
Even magical senses if there were any other of note in Astapor would find nothing but empty air.
I was alone on the roof of what used to be the Plaza of Punishment.
Being here kinda reminded me how the original Aegor had seen how the Good Masters had displayed failures here, slaves who'd tried to run, who'd fought back, who'd simply broken under the weight.
Now the building housed the textile cooperative.
The only things hanging were banners in colors that would've gotten slaves beaten: reds, golds, the purple that once meant royalty.
It felt like an eternity since I'd killed the Dothraki horde.
An eternity since I'd announced the election for The Second, the administrative position I needed even though it had only been days because apparently liberating a city meant drowning in grain distribution schedules and inane complaints.
An eternity since I'd realized that freedom could fracture into five different philosophies, each convinced it alone honored my vision.
Each probably right.
Each potentially catastrophic.
The thought tasted like copper.
Like the moment before violence.
I pulled the magic tighter, feeling it respond.
The Archmage essence in my chest, that second heart that had given someone being reborn in a dying if not dead slave boy the power to reshape reality pulsed with steady rhythm.
Not uncomfortable.
Just present.
Always present now.
Growing.
But I shoved that thought down.
Not tonight.
Tonight I had a city to spy on.
Below, Astapor moved through evening routines.
Markets closing.
Families gathering.
The solar-punk structures I'd conjured, living buildings grown from magic and will glowed softly as they absorbed the last sunlight.
No hunger here.
No sickness.
The Panaceas ensured that.
Paradise, built on burnt foundations.
And now paradise wanted to vote on its future.
God, I hoped this wasn't a mistake.
I stepped off the roof.
For three stories I fell, then caught myself with a thought.
Gravity bent.
Air cushioned.
Landing was silent, and then I was walking through streets I'd remade, past people I'd freed, wrapped in magic that made me less than a ghost.
Completely undetectable.
Exactly how I needed to be.
The first rally was in the Weaver's Quarter, where Rollo the Resurrected as he was called held court.
I'd killed Rollo once in a way.
Watched him die in the battle against the Dothraki, throat opened by an arakh, blood spraying in that way that meant seconds not minutes.
Then I'd pulled his soul back from whatever came after, stitched it into flesh with magic that felt more easy than breathing.
He'd woken screaming my name like many others.
But unlike many others of my soldiers, he was now a would be prophet.
And I was apparently the god he preached about.
Fantastic.
I knew that sooner or later, with how the people of Astapor treated me, even though I had told them otherwise, something like that would have happened but a man could hope.
The crowd around his platform was massive.
Hundreds, maybe thousands, filling the square where we'd built the communal ovens.
Fresh bread mixed with incense, when had they started burning incense?
And underneath it all, something else.
Something tangible.
Something I felt like a weigh, that I could probably feel the way I did only because of my circumstances.
Faith.
Raw and thick enough to taste.
It pressed against my skin like heat from a forge, made the air feel charged.
These people weren't just supporting Rollo's campaign.
They were praying.
I moved through the crowd, invisible, and no one reacted.
A woman turned to speak to her neighbor and her shoulder passed through the space I occupied without contact, the magic adjusting our positions in the micro-seconds between perception and reality.
Perfect stealth.
"—AND THE EMPYREAN SPOKE," Rollo's voice boomed across the square. The man could project.
I didn’t know how that name came to be, Empyrean that is and I didn’t know why it had seemingly become the favourite title the people of Astapor had for me.
On one side, I was glad to not be called as much as before the divine child, the liberator and all of that.
On the other side, Empyrean.
I didn’t have any proof yet but I was sure that someone or something I hadn’t found yet was behind it to fuck with me in some ways.
He stood on a platform decorated with flowers which was a particular choice but who was I to come between a prophet and his flowers? His face, scarred when it should have been healed because he had chosen to inflict it on himself, to keep a reminder on his face from the death I'd rescued him from, caught the torchlight.
Martyr made manifest.
"He spoke, and the words were FIRE. He spoke, and the dead ROSE. He spoke, and the masters who had claimed dominion over our flesh, who had BRANDED us, who had BROKEN us—" Rollo's voice cracked, genuine emotion bleeding through. "—were broken in turn. NOT by our hands. We were weak. We were SLAVES. But the Empyrean—"
"BLESSED BE HIS NAME," the crowd roared back.
The sound hit like a physical thing.
I felt it in my chest, in that place where the Archmage essence lived.
Like a prayer.
Like a resonance.
Like a Recognition.
They weren't just shouting.
They were feeding me.
They were worshipping me.
They were making me stronger.
Their faith, their devotion, their absolute conviction that I was divine, it was tangible.
Real.
Power that I could, if I wanted, reach out and use.
I didn't.
But I could feel it there as if waiting.
"—the Empyrean saw our suffering and said NO MORE." Rollo spread his arms wide. The scars on his throat seemed to catch light. "He who had been slave like us. He who had suffered as we suffered. He who DIED and RETURNED, bearing gifts beyond mortal comprehension."
He paused, letting the weight of that sink in.
"The Panaceas that end all sickness, that restore youth and vigor, that make us BEAUTIFUL as we were meant to be. Look around you, brothers and sisters. LOOK at each other."
The crowd did.
I did too, because he wasn't wrong.
The Panaceas didn't just heal.
They optimized.
Every person who'd eaten from the fruit I'd conjured had been transformed over weeks and months.
Scars faded. Missing teeth regrew. Bodies that had been broken by labor or malnutrition or simple age became... more.
Almost superhuman.
Humanity at its peak potential.
The people of Astapor looked like heroes from ancient stories.
Like the demigods from myths. Beautiful in a way that was almost eerie, fae-like because it was natural and impossible at once.
"We were slaves," Rollo said softly, but his voice carried. "We were UGLY, because slavery is ugly. Bent. Broken. Scarred. And now look at us. The Empyrean gave us back not just freedom but DIGNITY. He remade us into what we should have been. What we DESERVED to be."
A woman near me was crying, touching her own face like she still couldn't believe it was real.
"And he gave us homes that live and breathe. Food that never spoils. Abundance without limit. The Panaceas don't RUN OUT. The magic doesn't FADE. The gifts he gave are ETERNAL, because HE is eternal."
The crowd swayed. Some wept openly.
"And now, my brothers and sisters, we face a choice." Rollo's voice dropped, intimate despite the hundreds listening. "The Empyrean, in his infinite wisdom, asks us to select The Second. A voice to speak when he is occupied with matters beyond our understanding. A hand to guide when he walks between cities bringing a future world of peace and freedom."
I felt my jaw clench.
"But I ask you: what mortal voice could speak for a god? What human hand could guide divine purpose?" Rollo turned slowly, making eye contact across the crowd.
The theatrical training was obvious.
The man had been a story-slave before, entertaining masters with tales.
Now he entertained the masses with theology.
"The answer, my family, is NONE. No mortal can speak for the divine. But we can SERVE. We can become vessels for his will. We can build not institutions of paper and bureaucracy—" contempt dripped from his voice, "—but TEMPLES. Not temples of stone, but of FLESH. Of SPIRIT. Of FAITH."
He raised his hands, and his voice rose with them. "The Second should not be an administrator. The Second should be the HIGH PRIEST of the Church of Liberation. And through prayer, through devotion, through FAITH, we can ensure that Astapor remains forever blessed, forever guided, forever—"
He stopped mid-sentence.
Stood absolutely still.
The crowd quieted, confused, until someone gasped.
Flowers were growing.
From the wooden platform beneath Rollo's feet, from the spaces between boards, green shoots pushed upward.
They grew with visible speed, seconds, not days unfurling into blossoms of red and gold.
The same impossible flowers that decorated the platform spread like wildfire, covering the wood, climbing toward Rollo's robes, blooming in defiance of reason and sense.
The crowd went silent. Then someone screamed, not in fear, but in rapture.
"MIRACLE! THE EMPYREAN WORKS THROUGH HIM!"
Rollo looked down at the flowers, and his expression was complicated.
Awe.
Pride.
Vindication.
He knelt slowly, touching one of the blossoms with shaking fingers.
"You see?" His voice was barely a whisper, but it carried. "You SEE? This is why faith matters. This is why The Second must be one who BELIEVES, who CHANNELS, who—"
He looked up, and tears streaked his face. "I am not worthy of this. I am nothing. But the Empyrean's grace flows through those who open themselves to it. Through those who WORSHIP. And if I can do this—" he gestured at the flowers, "—imagine what we could accomplish if ALL of Astapor turned their hearts toward him in absolute devotion."
The crowd exploded.
Chanting, crying, calling my name.
Not Aegor.
Titles.
Empyrean. Liberator. God-Who-Was-Slave.
I stood invisible three feet from the platform, staring at the flowers, and analyzed what I was seeing through my magical senses.
Magic.
Real, actual magic.
Not mine, technically I wasn't doing this.
But coming from somewhere adjacent to me, channeled through Rollo, manifesting as impossible growth.
I reached out with my own senses, that awareness that came with the Archmage essence, and traced the flows.
Faith.
That's what I found.
The crowd's belief, their devotion, their absolute conviction that I was divine, it was pooling, concentrating, flowing toward Rollo because he was the focus, the priest, the one who spoke my name with such conviction.
And then it was being used.
Shaped.
Turned into manifestation.
Rollo wasn't a mage.
He had no personal power, no essence, no training.
He didn’t the blood of a king, the blood of a dragon when blood was one of the most important factor when it came to magic in this world.
Rollo didn’t have this, I had to admit but Rollo wasn’t nobody anymore.
Rollo was one of my soldiers who fought against alive and undead Dothraki, who killed more than dozens, maybe hundreds, who was killed and came back to fight because he believed in me.
He was someone who had eaten many of my Panaceas, fruits I had made to eradicate sickness, fruits that changed the people of Astapor into better versions of themselves, fruits made from my magic and my will, me with the essence of the Archmage, me who was capable of wielding faith directed at me and striking the divine down.
I had thought that the likes of Daenerys with her Targaryen bloodline were the ones to keep eyes on with me having brought back magic stronger than it had ever been but maybe, the people I should be worrying about were my own.
More than that, I could see looking at Rollo’s soul that he believed. And because he believed, because thousands believed, the magic responded.
My magic.
Because they were worshipping me, and worship in this world was POWER.
I'd known that, intellectually.
Had known that in the books, in the original timeline, there were examples.
The Old Gods of the North who could be said to be working in some way through their Greenseers.
The Green Men on the Isle of Faces.
The Red Priests of R'hllor calling down fire and seeing through flames and bringing back the dead.
Thoros of Myr resurrecting Beric Dondarrion six times.
Not because Thoros was powerful, by his own admission, he'd been a drunk who'd lost faith.
But because R'hllor answered.
Because belief, prayer, worship, these things were REAL here.
They generated power that the divine could channel back to the faithful.
And I'd accepted worship.
Had used the faith of my army, of all the slaves in this world who believed in freedom, in me as a weapon against the Great Stallion's manifestation.
Had felt that power surge through me and welcomed it not because I had but because it had felt right.
I'd accepted the mantle.
The title.
The role.
God of Freedom.
And now worship was generating magic, and that magic was flowing through my faithful, and Rollo the Resurrected could make flowers bloom because thousands of people believed he spoke for me.
No matter how much I didn't want to admit it, no matter how uncomfortable it made me, the man wasn't wrong.
I was the source of his power.
The thought sat in my stomach like a stone.
Below, Rollo was organizing the crowd, speaking about faith and devotion and building a church that could channel divine will.
About how The Second should be chosen not for administrative skill but for spiritual purity.
For the strength of their belief.
And people were listening.
Were believing.
Were AGREEING.
Because they'd just watched magic happen.
Watched proof manifest in flowers and faith.
I left before I did something stupid like reveal myself.
Walked through the crowd, still invisible, still undetectable.
What was the point of being given the choice to choose if your choice was the wish to discard the choice itself?
I couldn’t help but feel as if it was a fucking waste.
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The faction I her chosen to deem the Closed Circle met in what used to be a slave barracks.
The symbolism was clearly intentional.
Varello Snake-Eye didn't do anything by accident.
The man who'd organized the city's defense while I fought the Dothraki, who'd turned panicked refugees into a functional militia, understood optics the way a smith understood steel.
Varello snake-eye who was already one of my representatives, one of the few members of the legislative branch.
Varello snake-eye who wasn't here because he wanted to be the Second but because he was helping his older sister in trying to become it, acting at this moment here in her place so that she could shore more support somewhere else.
Divide to better reign.
The barracks hadn't been torn down.
Instead it had been converted, chains removed, punishment cells turned into meeting rooms, cramped quarters opened up.
But the bones remained visible.
Reminder and warning.
I slipped through the door behind a group of traders, magic holding steady.
The space inside was large, circular, with a single round table at its center.
Maybe forty people.
Merchants, former overseers who'd turned on their masters, freed slaves who'd risen in the trade guilds.
And Varello, sitting not at the head because a circle had no head but positioned to see every face.
His slitted eye looked sharp tonight instead of how bored and uncaring it usually was in our representative’s meetings.
The normal eye, dark and sharp, tracked everything too.
"—can't simply let anyone enter," a merchant named Denzo was saying, gesturing emphatically. "The food we're sending out, the grain, the meat—that comes FROM somewhere. FROM someone. If we open the gates to everyone who comes fleeing slavery—"
"We become a target," Varello finished quietly. His voice cut through the discussion like a blade. "Yes. We've established this."
"Then you agree we need borders? Real ones?" A woman named Lira leaned forward. Former overseer.
Now was trying the run the textile trade or well, as much as one could in a city like my Astapor when money wasn’t technically needed anymore.
"I agree," Varello said carefully, "that what the Empyrean built here is precious. That it requires protection. The question is how we protect it without betraying what it represents."
"Pretty words," Denzo muttered. "But words don't feed refugees we can't support. Words don't stop slavers from sending spies among the desperate."
"No," Varello agreed. He stood, moving around the table slowly. "But walls do. Inspections do. CONTROLLED immigration does. We're not talking about closing Astapor. We're talking about ensuring those who enter can contribute, integrate, SUSTAIN the paradise the Empyrean gifted us."
"And if they can't?" A young man I didn't recognize. "If they're too broken, too traumatized, too—"
"Then we heal them," Varello said sharply. "The Empyrean gave us tools for that. The Panaceas work on any ailment. But we do it CAREFULLY. We do it SUSTAINABLY. We don't let good intentions destroy what we've built."
He paused. The silence was heavy.
"The Empyrean gave us everything. Freedom. Health. Homes. Food. A future." Varello's voice dropped lower, more intense. "And then he LEFT. To fight the Dothraki, yes. To protect us, absolutely. But he LEFT. And you know what we learned?"
He looked around the table. Made eye contact with each person.
"We learned we could survive without constant guidance. That we could organize, defend, build. That his gifts didn't make us dependent, they made us CAPABLE. And now we face a question: do we honor that capability by maintaining what he built? Or do we squander it trying to save everyone, everywhere, all at once?"
"You're saying we prioritize Astapor over other slaves." The young man's voice shook. "That we tell them to wait? To suffer longer?"
"I'm saying," Varello replied, and his voice had an edge now, "that you can't liberate anyone if you've destroyed your foundation. The Empyrean created a MODEL here. Proof that life without slavery works. Proof that former slaves can build, govern, THRIVE. But models only work if they're successful."
He moved back toward his seat. "If Astapor collapses under refugees we can't support, if our economy fails, if we descend into chaos—we don't just lose a city. We lose the PROOF. We lose the example that could inspire change elsewhere."
Dangerous logic. Sound, but dangerous.
"The Empyrean will free Essos," Varello continued. "We know this. But until he does, our duty is to keep Astapor strong. To ensure that when he returns from his next crusade, he finds not a struggling refugee camp, but a thriving city that can serve as foundation for his greater mission."
"And if he disagrees?" Lira asked. "If he wants open borders?"
"Then we open them," Varello said simply. "But until he tells us otherwise, we do what we know he'd want: we PROTECT his creation. We ensure his miracle doesn't become a tragedy."
A side conversation caught my attention. Two people at the table's edge, speaking quietly.
"—if Rollo wins and turns Astapor into a theocracy—"
"Won't happen. The Empyrean doesn't want worship. He wants RESULTS. He wants Astapor to work, to PROVE his vision is viable. Rollo's turning him into a religious figure when what we need is—"
"A symbol of competence. Exactly. That's why the Closed Circle matters. We're not trying to channel divinity. We're maintaining his LEGACY."
They believed it.
Everyone here except Varello believed it.
This whole faction genuinely thought they were honoring me even though they were only getting used.
By turning paradise into a fortress.
The argument continued, specific border protocols, inspection procedures, resource management but I'd heard enough.
Sound reasoning that could harden into xenophobia.
Protection that could become isolation.
Pragmatism that could turn cruel.
But right now, tonight, they were just people seemingly trying to preserve something precious.
People I'd freed to make exactly these choices.
Even if their choices were ones that didn't necessarily agree with me.
I guess that was freedom and choice too.
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The so called Liberator's faction met in the education center, the largest solar-punk-like structure I'd created.
Of course they did.
I would have too had I been them.
The building was magic made solid: living architecture that breathed, regulated temperature, reconfigured rooms based on need.
Walls glowing with soft bioluminescence.
Floors like moss.
Ceiling that showed actual sky above.
I'd been proud when I'd made it.
Now, seeing it filled with hundreds of passionate people, I felt something akin to pride, pride into something I made, I built, I did not because it was the right thing or the correct thing or the moral thing but because and only because I could.
Miriam the Matron stood at the center of what used to be the main lecture hall.
The room had reconfigured into amphitheater seating, concentric circles focused inward.
She wasn't elevated.
Wasn't on a platform.
Just standing in the middle, surrounded, vulnerable.
Commanding absolute attention anyway.
She'd been a slave midwife before freedom.
One of the few slaves valuable beyond manual labor.
She'd delivered Good Masters' children, held slave women's hands as they birthed babies that would be property.
Watched some mothers die when treatment was deemed too expensive.
Now she kinda ran the medical college, helping with distributing to all freed slaves the Panaceas, to spread a more natural healing other than what my what magic alone could provide.
"—and what's our response?" she was saying. Her voice was strong without shouting. "What's our ANSWER to the suffering that continues beyond our borders? We sit in paradise, full and healthy and FREE, and we do WHAT exactly?"
"The Empyrean is handling—" someone started.
"The Empyrean is ONE CHILD," Miriam interrupted.
Dangerous words.
Borderline heretical some from Rollo's faction would have said.
She continued anyway. "One incredibly powerful, impossibly generous person. But ONE. And he's already done more than anyone should have to. He died for us. Came back. Killed our masters. Destroyed the Dothraki. Created food, healing, shelter. Given us EVERYTHING."
She turned slowly, ensuring everyone could see her face.
"And our response is to ask him to do MORE? To expect him to single-handedly free all of Essos while we sit comfortable? Is that what freedom means? That we're free to be PASSIVE?"
"What are you suggesting?" A young woman stood from the seating. "That we fight? Most of us were field slaves, house slaves—"
"I'm suggesting," Miriam said carefully, "that we become what we need to be. The Empyrean gave us tools. The Panaceas ensure health. The structures ensure shelter. The abundance ensures food. We have resources. We have CAPABILITY. What we lack is WILL."
She pulled a map from her robes, unrolling it. Essos. Astapor marked in gold, slave cities in red.
"The Second shouldn't just manage Astapor. The Empyrean already created systems for that. The Second should COORDINATE our support. Not military conquest—the Empyrean handles that. But PREPARATION. Safe houses. Medical supplies. Training for refugees. Infrastructure for when he breaks the next city's chains."
"An underground railroad," someone said, and the term didn't translate perfectly but the concept did.
"Infrastructure for liberation," Miriam agreed. "The Empyrean is the SWORD. We should be the SHIELD. He breaks chains. We catch those who fall. He destroys masters. We rebuild what comes after."
"Others would never agree to the resources required," another voice called.
Miriam's expression hardened. "Then they misunderstands what we have. The Panaceas don't RUN OUT. The Empyrean told me this himself when he created them. They're sustained by his magic, and his magic has no limit we've found. The structures don't DECAY. The abundance isn't FINITE. It's not about resources. It's about COURAGE."
She paused, and when she spoke again her voice was softer but more intense.
"I held a woman once while she birthed twins. Beautiful babies. Perfect. And I watched her master kill one in front of her. Killed an infant because two was inefficient."
The room went silent.
"The mother's name was Shala. She survived another year before grief killed her. The remaining twin lives. She's seven now, named Mira, and she plays in Astapor's streets, free and healthy and ALIVE because the Empyrean said no more."
Miriam looked around the room. I saw tears on her face but her voice didn't waver.
"How many Shalas exist right now? How many Miras will die because we chose comfort over action? The Empyrean gave us paradise. But paradise isn't meant to be HIDDEN. It's meant to be SHARED. It's meant to GROW."
"Even if it costs us?" someone asked quietly.
"Especially then. Because if our freedom is only valuable when it's safe—then it isn't freedom. It's just another cage."
The applause was thunderous.
I stood invisible at the hall's edge, watching people surge toward Miriam, watching debates break out.
Aggressive compassion. Expansionist philosophy. The mirror image of Varello's protective isolation.
Both convinced they honored me.
Both potentially right.
Both potentially disastrous.
The young woman who'd argued for expansion reached Miriam. "How do we start? If The Second coordinates this, how do we BEGIN?"
Miriam smiled, fierce and determined. "We already have. The medical college isn't just for Astapor. We've been training people, teaching them to move quietly, preparing for months."
"Does the Empyrean know?"
"The Empyrean gave us freedom," Miriam said carefully. "Gave us CHOICE. If we choose to help others using what he gave us, that's not something we need permission for. That's what freedom MEANS."
I felt something twist in my chest.
Pride and something else I couldn't name all at once.
She wasn't waiting for me.
She was preparing to support my mission in ways I hadn't asked for, hadn't authorized.
Hadn't forbidden.
Because I'd told them they were free. And I'd meant it.
This was what it looked like.
But then I thought about it, actually thought about it and realized something that should have been obvious.
If slaves were approaching Astapor's borders, I'd know.
The city was saturated with my magic.
The structures were extensions of my will.
I'd feel refugees coming long before they arrived.
And I'd help them.
Of course I would.
That's why I'd built this place.
That's what the Panaceas were for.
It's then I understood.
Miriam's faction wasn't responding to a problem that existed.
They were preparing for a future where I might not be here.
Where I might be occupied elsewhere, and someone else would need to catch the falling.
They were building systems for my absence.
Just like Araz's faction.
Just like Varello's fortress mentality.
Everyone was preparing for a world where I wasn't constantly present, because I'd already proven I couldn't be everywhere.
The thought was uncomfortable.
True and in some way freeing, but uncomfortable.
The meeting continued, logistics, training schedules, resource allocation but I'd heard enough.
Three factions, three philosophies, three ways of honoring me.
Religious devotion creating literal miracles.
Protective isolation preserving paradise.
Aggressive expansion spreading freedom.
Each one potentially right.
Each one potentially poison if taken to extremes.
And all of them assuming I'd eventually leave in some way or form.
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What I liked calling the Practical faction met in what used to be the Registry of Property where slaves had been catalogued, valued, recorded like tools or livestock.
Araz the Scribe had converted it into something between library and war room.
Maps covered walls. Trade routes marked in colors.
Resources noted.
Population distributions.
Detailed, precise, obsessive.
The contrast with other factions was stark.
No theatrical platform.
No passionate speeches.
No dramatic declarations.
Just data.
That's why I liked them most.
Araz sat at a central desk, surrounded by perhaps a dozen people.
All of them had that particular look of people who thought in lists and systems, who saw the world as problems to be solved through organization.
I'd liked Araz immediately after freeing the city. He'd been a record-keeper for the Good Masters, a slave who could read and write and calculate.
He'd used those skills to help as one of my representatives in the legislative.
After we had won, after we had killed all the good masters, there were merchants we hadn't killed, we hadn't be sure of the culpability.
Araz through his contacts had revealed the records.
Names.
Crimes.
Witnesses.
We'd held trials, not just executions, because Araz had ensured we could.
Now it seems that he was trying his best to systematize paradise.
"—the expansion rate is concerning," a woman named Phera was saying, gesturing to a chart. I couldn't read the details from my position, but the trend was clear: growth, accelerating. "We're taking in refugees constantly. The Empyrean handles their immediate needs, but integration takes TIME. Language training, job placement, social adjustment—these things can't be rushed."
"The Panaceas handle health," someone noted.
"Health isn't everything," Phera replied. "A healthy person who can't communicate, who doesn't understand how our systems work, who doesn't know the vastness and the limits of their freedom, that's still a problem. And we're getting hundreds every week."
"Which is wonderful," Araz said firmly. "Don't misunderstand—we're not arguing against accepting refugees. We're identifying bottlenecks in the integration process. Places where people fall through cracks despite the Empyrean's gifts."
He stood, moving to one of the maps. "Look. Three months ago, we had five hundreds thousand people in Astapor. Now we have nearly six hundred twelve thousand. That's too quick of a growth. The Empyrean's magic scales, food, shelter, healing, all of it expands to meet needs. But SYSTEMS don't scale automatically. Teachers, administrators, mediators, these require training. Time."
"So what do we do?" a young man asked.
"We BUILD systems and make others understand why it makes us the better choice," Araz said. "Systems that can handle growth. That can maintain themselves even when the Empyrean is occupied elsewhere. Because we can't expect him to micromanage forever."
There it was.
The same assumption.
"You think he'll leave," someone said. Not quite an accusation.
Araz was quiet for a moment. "I think the Empyrean has a mission larger than Astapor. He's said it himself, he means to free all of Essos. To end slavery everywhere. That's going to require him to be elsewhere. Frequently. For long periods."
He returned to his desk, pulled out a thick book. The pages were filled with diagrams, notes, observations.
"This is what I've been working on. Every creation the Empyrean has made, documented. How they work, as best we can observe. How to maintain them. How to use them effectively."
"Why?" Phera asked. "The magic maintains itself."
"Because we need to UNDERSTAND," Araz replied. "Not how to replicate it, I'm not delusional enough to think we can match the Empyrean's power. But how to work WITH it. How to identify when something isn't functioning correctly. How to maximize the gifts we've been given."
He opened the book to a page covered in careful sketches. The Panaceas' fruit tree.
"Look. The tree produces fruit constantly. Never stops. The fruit doesn't rot. Anyone who eats it gains seemingly perfect health. We know this. But do we know what happens if someone eats too many fruits? We do now—I documented it. Nothing additional happens. One fruit is enough for a day. This means we can calculate precise distribution. We can ensure every refugee gets exactly one fruit immediately upon arrival, no waste, no confusion."
"That's..." the young man paused. "Actually useful."
"That's COMPETENCE," Araz said. "That's what The Second should provide. Not religious interpretation. Not political philosophy. Not expansion coordination. MANAGEMENT. Making sure the paradise the Empyrean built functions efficiently."
"Sounds boring," someone muttered.
"Boring keeps people alive," Araz replied sharply. "Boring ensures the sewage system works, food gets distributed, disputes get resolved fairly. The Empyrean gave us TOOLS. The least we can do is use them competently."
He moved to another map, this one showing Astapor's layout. "Look at growth patterns. We're expanding organically, which is fine, but inefficient. If we planned it, designated zones for specific purposes, created infrastructure BEFORE people arrived we'd integrate refugees faster. They'd have clearer paths to contribution."
"You want to bureaucratize paradise," Lira said flatly.
"I want to MAINTAIN paradise," Araz corrected. "There's a difference. The Empyrean gave us something unprecedented. A city without hunger, disease, or want. Do you know how FRAGILE that could be if we're not careful? If we don't build proper systems?"
"The magic handles it," someone argued.
"The magic handles material needs," Araz agreed. "Food, shelter, health. But it doesn't handle human nature. It doesn't resolve disputes. It doesn't create social cohesion. It doesn't teach children to read. THOSE things require human effort. Require ORGANIZATION."
He sat back down, and his expression was complicated. Reverent but practical.
"The Empyrean is the greatest thing that ever happened to us. To all of Essos. But he's not a city manager. He shouldn't HAVE to be. He should be free to focus on his mission—breaking chains, destroying slavers, liberating the enslaved. And we should prove we're worthy of his gifts by maintaining what he built without constant intervention."
"That sounds like you're trying to make him irrelevant," someone said accusingly.
"No," Araz replied quietly. "It sounds like I'm trying to make him PROUD. By proving we can stand on our own. That his gifts didn't create dependents. They created capable people."
The meeting continued, infrastructure planning, resource allocation, bureaucratic procedures but I'd heard the core message.
Araz wasn't trying to replace me.
He was trying to free me.
By building systems that didn't require constant divine intervention.
By documenting my gifts so they could be used efficiently.
By proving that the people I'd liberated could handle liberation.
It was practical.
Thoughtful. Exactly what a functioning city needed.
And it assumed I'd eventually be too busy or too transformed to handle inane complaints.
Which was probably true.
The thought sat uncomfortably.
Was that what it felt becoming obsolete?
How bitter of a feeling that is.
Comments
TabbyRabbit
Just binge the whole thing made me emotional so many times! I hope Araz wins sbecause so far he is he is proving that he is not as extreme as the others. If the others are circles he is the one that can turn that into venn diagrams.
Caleb S
Absolutely love this story, binge read it over a day and a half and sad I ran out of chapters. Can’t wait to see where you take it
Matthew Moore
Well lets’s hope Araz wins. As long as the theocrat doesn’t win everything should be fine. Seriously that guy’s message seems like the antithesis of what the MC is trying to do.
