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Agents and Kings chapter 2 pages 13 - 16
🕑 Added 2021-10-01 03:12:56 +0000 UTCgotta get through some quick exposition before we can move on to finally meet with Calloway. I'm trying to make this exposition so it doesn't feel dragged out, I just need to get through some basic information with which to build on in future chapters. In past comics I've rushed through the first few chapters, which probably led to a lot of confusion on the reader's part, and I want to avoid that with this comic as much as possible.
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thank you so much~ I want so badly to just move on with the story but I've made too many mistakes in past stories because of that
It's difficult to imagine being bombarded with all of these emotions at the same time for someone who is so new to them. Thank you very much!
I think your pace is great! I am glad you took the time to explain some things and leave some bread pieces along the way.
I... really like that muscel shirt. Is there anything Deleon doesn't look good in? Also, I relate so much to him. New chaotic feelings that don't make sense, shock and tiredness. It's good to see that the brothers care enough to feel bad, though. Regardless of their situation, they seem like good people.
I think you’re doing a wonderful job! It helps that this is all new to Deleon, just like it’s all new to your audience, so it feels natural. Speaking of Deleon, poor guy… he’s (understandably) so tired… 😞
