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Webcomic pilot pages 9 through 12
🕑 Added 2021-08-22 15:06:56 +0000 UTCI can't decide if this should be the conclusion of the pilot chapter or not. I have more pages done beyond this point and it would make sense to divide them up into chapters 1 and 2, I just want to make sure that I can establish as much background as possible before the story really takes off.
What do y'all think? I'm interested in your feedback and I'd like to know if you think leaving the pilot on a cliffhanger would be a good idea, or to make the chapter a little longer? Either way it won't affect me uploading more pages onto Patreon~
I'm having a lot of fun making these pages~ I wish I could make them faster without compromising quality... I also wish there were like 36 hours in the day so I had more time lol. Thank you all so much for your support, it means the world!
Comments
Kitty Kat
I have not but recently it seems like I might be able to open it thanks for looking into it though.
Hm... That's odd... I need to look into this. It might be that the files are big for the counter or application you're using. Have you tried different devices?
Kitty Kat
Just curious if there’s another place I could read your comic? For some reason it doesn’t let me open it up on here. 😭
Oh! Also you asked about chapters. Honestly, the flow is up to you. It is definitely a friggin strong cliffhanger, so it could definitely work as a place holder. Either way, I really enjoy your work and love the suspense!
I am surprised that they came back to pick them up! Is it bad that this show of kindness makes me just a little suspicious? I'm probably just jaded haha! Or maybe I just saw THE SLEEVES?! Whattttt??
Nalohia
This is A M A Z I N G! I would say leaving it at a cliff hanger is the perfect way to end the pilot chapter because I was literally screaming when I realized it ended and I absolutely have to find our what happens next. The art is, as always, breathtaking! Can’t wait for more!
More. M O R E!!! The cliffhanger!!! The suspense!!!!
Whoa.. this is a VERY good cliffhanger! I’m captivated but torn; leaving it here would build suspense, but i also want to know what happens. In my opinion I’d love to see more pages. But either way I love what we’ve seen so far!
