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AnK Chapter 6: A whole lotta pages

🕑 Added 2022-09-20 21:23:18 +0000 UTC

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Deleon is trapped in more ways than one. I am curious what Calloway will think of this outburst. There are too many avenues I can see him taking.

Emily Rose

I’m back reading a bit so this is late, but that “there is no freedom” panel is just so powerful and it sticks in my brain

I really enjoy how powerful Deleon's reaction feels as a reader. It's a normal reaction, but after chapters of them being somber and confused (because they're a doll), it just hits really hard. Like "o'shit. Things are getting reeeeaaal" *Cheif Kiss*

I quite like the dialogue in this scene, I thought it was really clear, easy to follow and explained how Deleon has been feeling up til now.

I like the new dialogue! It's a bit wordier, but it explains Deleon's thought process really well :) Good to see him stand up for himself.

Deleon handles a agument better than I do after only two to three weeks of being alive Again, I think Calloway didn't thought about how is "chevalry" would be remember *gets a spray bottle* Bad Walky, Bad. *proceed to spray the man