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Combat Healer Ch. 55

🕑 Added 2024-01-14 00:00:01 +0000 UTC

Comments

Christopher Miller

Upon rereading it again it seems as if Astaer somehow knows by looking at Remi that she's a lot older than she appears. Like she has a physical feature that indicates she's far older than would otherwise be possible.

Florida Reader

Good job avoiding burnout.

Jonathan Depenau

So......the most powerful team like, ever, now basically has a magical wormhole transporter dungeon device. That's fucking awesome

Itsasecret

Personally, I don't think trying to keep it partially secret, or other things for that matter, it a wise move. All of the women are sworn to trust him and, other than Lyla, are even fine with him being a monster, with Wren, etc. Knowing everyone's abilities and threats to everyone in the group are essential to identifying issues with not everyone is around and ensuring a good level of trust. I understand wanting to be quick (and to draw it out, as a storyteller), but everyone needs to know about the mother, about the eldritch that escaped from the King's advisor, what's happening with Eliza, Wren, Jasmine, how much his friend knows, etc.

Moi465

Oh, you're good. It wasn't a slight. You're doing great work.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I wish I could write faster, but it takes upwards of 20 to 40 hours just for one chapter (world-building, plotting, writing, editing, etc.). At least at this pace, I'm able to avoid burning myself out (for the most part).

Moi465

Yeah, we'll be needing 6 more CH episodes please. I miss being able to read chapters in rapid succession lol

Webstersponge

With the best last line

Pedro Comenda

Welp, cats out of the bag now, so much for trying to keep it hush hush Allister.

Christopher Miller

It was a nice story. The reunion tied up several dangling plot points about the girls learning more and more of of Allie's secrets. Something that foreshadows Erika, Eliza and Sylvia also getting put in the loop.