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Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 145

🕑 Added 2024-02-19 00:06:26 +0000 UTC

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Author Kaizer Wolf

Good catches! I fixed them!

Author Kaizer Wolf

You know what, 2 weeks later, and I just 'now' got this. LOL.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I suppose I probably should. I also wouldn't mind having hardcopies of these books. I plan on updating the cover art in the next couple of months, so maybe when I do that, I'll make paperback versions too.

Robert Crews

Are you planning on taking these books to print anytime soon?

Author Kaizer Wolf

I should clarify that when I say 'I just don't care,' the reason why is because there are a million more important things for me to worry about and focus on, and giving this particular issue my attention just isn't worth it. I'd rather just focus on writing what 'feels right' to me, and move on with my life (focusing on other, more important aspects of the story).

Itsasecret

I actually meant that getting close to that line but not crossing it would still be a turn on to many people and one that I'm surprised Kai didn't focus in the fact that Avery had sex with both Gabriella and Rebecca, which having sex with a mother and daughter, even if they do nothing with each other, is many people's fantasy. But all 4 women actually achieved that experience side by side as well

Author Kaizer Wolf

Against the rules on here.

Itsasecret

Lol, fair enough 😇

Author Kaizer Wolf

Lol, that's been a thing. I even did a poll on it at one point in time. Yes, it's basically just personal preference. Most writers use came. We are dealing with 'slang' that started as something verbal (most slang starts off as verbal). And in the past, writers used to write 'come' instead of 'cum,' as well as 'coming' instead of 'cumming.' Over time, the written version has kind of been a mix of come, coming, came, to slowly transitioning to the more common usage of cum, cumming, came. I personally think that's silly though. It doesn't make logical sense, which is why I use cum, cumming, cummed. Other writers have heavily disagreed with me. And I just don't care. I try to write 'came' and it just feels wrong to me, even though it's the more common usage. Plus, I've used cummed up until this point, so switching now would be inconsistent.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Yes, of course. Very soon, in fact (Chapter 9 and 10). If you want to keep up-to-date on that stuff, then join the game's Discord server (link is on the home screen in the game).

Stanley Rish Jr

Kaizer I have a question unrelated to the story. Any plans on releasing any new content for the game you made??

Itsasecret

Completely separate, is "cummed" just your personal preference to "came"? It always sounds a little off in my head, but I think that's just my personal preference.

Itsasecret

I'm not normally a fan of entire chapters just being sex, but I think this worked very well. Although it's never been a big focus, although I think you did mention it being an interest of Avery's, I would have thought it would have been a particular aspect, for Kai to enjoy, of the four women swapping partners that it meant each of Michelle, Avery, Gabrilla and Rebecca got to fuck both the mother and daughter of their respective partners.

Christopher Miller

I had anticipated a lot of steamy encounters one after the other. It was awesome to see Elizabeth and Delilah getting together, as well as basically all his other women getting their turn for his attention. Now we're just waiting to see if Claire, Tracy, Rachel & Laura get some action now, or if any of them will be waiting.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I very well may have accidentally. If you catch it, let me know and I'll fix it.

SovietDegendays

Nice chapter. Also maybe I'm just reading it wrong but in the scene where he fucks Rebecca I believe u swapped her and averys name around. Tho maybe I'm just misreading

Puggan Se

"the sex IS the plot!" + "I've still got to do some serious plotting" :-) good for you

J N

Making my hormones sore should be soar. There sex should be their

Moi465

Good chapter, so see is the plot for a while, huh? Lol

Author Kaizer Wolf

Good catch. Yeah, that's a Patreon problem. When there is italics next to non-italics, it sometimes removes the space between words. I usually have to manually look through for that happening, but sometimes I miss things like this one (especially when the combination is either small words, or sometimes the combo actually is a word, such as 'me at' turning into meat, lol).

Moi465

Took a peek at, not a peekat


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