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Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 148

🕑 Added 2024-03-25 00:20:38 +0000 UTC

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Itsasecret

Looking forward to reading the next chapter (as always, lol). Yeah, that's fair enough on why she'd be waiting, as I guess she expects him to be there all the time, not just somewhere he occasionally visits nowadays.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I have addressed the whole 'Avery not being brought up' issue in the next chapter. Hopefully that will answer your question. I do plan on bringing Serenity and Gabriella both back around to being much more involved with Kai. Regarding Mrs. Hayes being at the house, it was more like, she was just worried and waiting around for him to come home, so she could find out what happened. She would have waited there all day if she had to.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Glad to hear it!

Author Kaizer Wolf

I'm addressing that in the next chapter.

Author Kaizer Wolf

It's not going to work out, plot wise, for anything 'too special' to happen. Certainly, there will be plot development, but it won't be something big like meeting Eve.

Christopher Miller

Are we finally going to meet Eve, Kai's birth mom in chapter 150 maybe?

Christopher Miller

I'm curious as to where all the other plot threads of women dancing at the peripheries of the plot. Many of them aren't going to be his women, but I have no doubt some will. Micah Garcia, Elaine, Serenity's friends Jessica & Abby, Annabella Watson, Miriam's blonde succubus maid, Absolom's receptionist, to say nothing of Eve, Tracy, Laura, Rachel and Nicole as they firmly enter Kai's orbit. I have to ask, is there another bad girl MILF out there with established ties to Kai's women needing rescue and redemption more than Claire ever did. Specifically I'm asking about Claire's Mom?

Author Kaizer Wolf

Good catches! I fixed them.

Christopher Miller

Couple of other thoughts. Is Kai going to swing by Claire's old place to pick up the rest of her things? I can't believe that any teenage girl would be able to stuff everything they own into a single duffle bag. Are we going to finally going to meet Claire's Mom? I'll go out on a limb and predict that once she gets a load of Kai and figures out Claire is dating him she is going to be hella jealous of her daughter.

Christopher Miller

#4- One for Rachel since she and Laura will be showing up soon. Rachel will be bonding with Rebecca and Kelsey eventually. Succubi seem to be inclined to the electricity affinity and Rachel has it strong enough to be a threat to nuke the whole city with a "bolt from the blue" ala Sodom and Gomorrah. Or, perhaps Rachel or Kelsey will bond with Miriam and Delilah? Although the two full-blooded succubi have such a long history together I don't see how a recently turned mortal could possibly forge a bond of equals with two succubi who are each more than 3,000 years old. Just my opinion obviously.

Christopher Miller

Fair. Also, as far as Nicole pulling for Avery over Claire. I think as much as she loves Claire she isn't stupid. I'm sure she is fully aware of how immature and shallow Claire has been at times. I think ultimately she was pulling for Claire to become worthy of Kai, but had to conceed that Avery was much more deserving of being with someone of Kai's caliber. If she truly did see Claire as a niece/daughter she had to understand that her behavior was destructive and without significant change would doom any relationship. Thankfully, Claire DID change, even if the brat in her peeks out momentarily here and there.

Christopher Miller

#3- Next prediction, Claire is going to bond with Elizabeth (both have the fire affinity). Another maternalish MILF who can give her some mentoring and give back affection that Elizabeth probably needs since she lost her own daughter. Oh, and eventually Claire gains Gwen's trust so all the fire girls (Serenity, Gwen, Elizabeth, Claire, and possibly Bethel?) all form one big bond.

Christopher Miller

#2- Claire didn't seem stunned about the fact that Nicole wasn't human. She was livid about her lying about marrying a man, but had no visible reaction to hiding the fact she is a faerie. So, it makes sense to me that Claire knows far more about the supernatural world than she lets on. Perhaps she knows this because of her precognitive gifts, or possibly she knows more about her supernatural family than she lets on.

Christopher Miller

Also, a few predictions. #1- In most fantasy lit illusion magic is commonly light based, as is healing and divination magic. Thus it makes sense that Nicole will end up being compatible with Gabriella & Michelle (yet another hot blonde).

Itsasecret

Well, Claire's mum would have no idea who Kai was, let alone that Claire would be with him or where he lives, so I can understand her not being there.

Christopher Miller

I think it was more like the only two or possibly three people she was familiar with who might know an update on Claire was Claire's Mom, Kai and possibly Avery. She probably would have no reason to have Avery or Kai's phone number and Claire's phone was probably destroyed (again) when she went nova. She might have tried contacting Claire's Mom, and assuming she would even talk to Nicole, all she could tell her is that she was with Kai & Avery due to Claire calling her Mom with an update. So yes, since Nicole didn't have work for the day and she was frantic for an update. She spent it staking out one of two places where Claire might logically be, the other being the Copeland residence. Especially since it now appears that Kai is her protector and guardian it makes sense she chose Kai's place. The only thing is I'm surprised about, is that Claire's Mom wasn't there as well, since she had to have heard about the assault, the "gas leak" and the ambulance ride. It leads credence to the idea that Claire's Mom is a self-centered bitch. I mean, if that happened to my daughter, even if we were estranged, come hell or highwater I'd track her down for details and to absolutely confirm she was now truly safe.

Author Kaizer Wolf

The login is completely handled by Patreon, so that's an issue on there end (or perhaps not an issue, and just a way to prevent people from sharing logins or something).

Itsasecret

I was also surprised that Kai wasn't more surprised that Nicole knew to be at the house at this time, as I don't think anyone else knew he was going there. I might have missed where that was explained though

Itsasecret

Tbh, I'm a bit surprised that Mrs Hayes was so happy about Kai getting together with Avery instead of Claire. I also was very surprised that Avery didn't come up in the conversation, as I'm sure that Nicole would be even happier fucking all 3 of her hottest students, not just 2. Where I'm re-reading all the old chapters, I still feel really sorry for Gabriella missing out when new women first have sex with Kai, given her interest in that specific scenario and generally watching Kai with other women.

Puggan Se

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Christopher Miller

Also looking forward to seeing Kai explain to Rachel and Laura how he's gone from 11 women to 17 women in a day. That's not even including them! TBH he probably should have already been including Eve since he's known since Saturday night that she desperately wants that. He's also known since then that Bethel is indeed a separate entity who also desires that connection with him, even if he didn't know about his promise to her until Sunday night after he left Joseph's place. In addition to Eve and Bethel there was Claire, Tracy, Kelsey, and Nicole IN ABOUT ONE DAY! You got some 'splaining to do Kai!

Florida Reader

Nicely done. This was a good chapter, I like how you have brough Eve into this through the teacher.

Christopher Miller

Second point- Everything we have learned about Claire's Mom to this point is that she is a bitch at least some of the time. So if Claire continues to receive healthy maternal acceptance and love from Nicole, Michelle, etc. she should be a long ways to being a better and more balanced person. It seems like the small amount of attention and love she's received from Nicole for the last several years may have gone a long ways to keeping her from being an absolute trainwreck of a bitch.

Christopher Miller

As for story points... It's crazy how confident Kai is now vs the Kai from less than two weeks ago. He's gone from not being able to look an attractive girl in the eyes to saying to a sexy, older, more experienced woman "Okay, you want to be my woman? Fine but you are going to fuck my other girlfriend first." That's a crazy personality adjustment. But I guess once you've died and come back to crush every enemy who've come up against you it does change you. Plus there is the fact more and more of his old personality is probably coming to the surface. The one where he had Delilah and Miriam as lovers early on in life and was willing to charge a demonic abomination to protect them.