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Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 170

🕑 Added 2024-10-21 00:08:04 +0000 UTC

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Author Kaizer Wolf

Good catch! I fixed it.

JayBase

We didn’t discuss it further since she returned her focus to the phone call, having only brought it up since she saw I was focused on her mind, all while I suddenly had all my focused demanded by Rebecca. Change “focused” to “focus”.

Allen Ferriola

Not too mention it seemed very special that he was able to get into the shower and basically was away his sins so to speak to where there was no more death tainting his soul. So I'm assuming he can do it again, if needed.

Allen Ferriola

So that's Jessica! Na I always felt like something was off with her the way she was being so pushy with serenity and I don't like it, and considering she has this foul smell according to Kai is even worse. Good chapter tho, and I love that Rebecca is FOREVER! And she knows it, so that's good to know 100% that Kai is immortal, and so is everyone with his blood I'm assuming. Which means most cannot stay in their jobs anyways for very long before people will start to question that they never age lol. But yeah this pimp deserves to disappear, however I do think it wise he contacts Roland about this. One he may be owned by Roland, of he may be involved with someone that could cause huge problems and it might be better to just pay him to go away, either way between Miriam and Roland, Kai never has to worry about money ever again lol.

Carl

Not sure i like rebecca being a sex pet, she was introduced as very dominant and with an aura of confidence, and it was also stated she isnt a lesbian succubus but rather does things sexually with women because kai enjoys it, so im not sure if all of that translates well into her being a young girls pet. Just my very early opinion and still excited to see how this relationship evolves in the future.

The Archer

Jessica simply has it bad for Serenity and feels left out of her life especially if she was instrumental in getting Serenity to start accepting how she felt about Kai. She could have easily been in Gabriella place if not for the kidnapping. Jessica from the sounds of it could have been Kai and Serenity’s pet. If anything, more friends in the department can’t hurt. Naughty redheads are a lot of fun. So, Reagen becomes a committed Dominant Sugar baby as Rebecca goes from Dominatrix to sex pet, talk about a Switch. The bonding seems to be missing something from the looks of it. Either one produces an affinity effect. As for the Reagan situation, how makes more sense. However, Kai doesn’t have to get his hands dirty especially since Roland’s son controls the underworld at his request. He could have him remove the pimp as atonement or replace him and clear the debt.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I probably need to run a couple of polls in the near future, just to see how everyone feels about all the love interests so far, especially since Raegan was the last official addition to the harem. I've mentioned this before, but I still plan on focusing long-term on the top 6 to 10 women. Of course, in pursuit of that, I do plan on bringing Serenity and Gabriella back more into the story.

Sparda

I'm not a fan of reagen so I didn't really care for the whole bonding scenario with her. I personally would have preferred reagen be a background character.

David A Franden

What would be bad with the ending would be if the bind didn't take that being said hes gonna end up his the family tree will be a root hes gonna end up a ray Steven's song. The dynamic will be interesting with the only potential issue I see is will Reagen be okay with all her sister wives and her pet daughter in law sister wife as well as grandma in law sister wife

Author Kaizer Wolf

Independent is correct, I believe. The decision was made independently of whether or not a bond was formed. Also, does this sound better? "Of course, almost everyone had a phone, and those phones had ended up all over the place."

Smit Patel

Yup all he needs to do is remove the all “ and those phones had kind of ended up all over the place”

Moi465

The bit that doesn't read well is "and those phones had all kind of ended up all over"

Moi465

Dependent on whether or not we formed a bond - you put independent

Author Kaizer Wolf

You don't think this sentence makes sense? "Of course, almost everyone had a phone, and those phones had all kind of ended up all over the place."

Moi465

Had all kind of

Moi465

I can't copy and paste for some reason but your first sentence on phones doesn't make sense.

Raul Salazar

Oooh goody. Some fucked around and is about to find out. I’m imagining that Kai won’t ever be stained with death ever again simply because he only goes after those who deserve it. The only question is whether he will give Alicia his blood or simply heal her with magic, and this Pimp might have more than two girls so what’ll happen to them?