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Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 159

🕑 Added 2024-07-07 23:30:00 +0000 UTC

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Allen Ferriola

Was a great chapter as always, I hope Rachael doesn't end up too much on the back burner, tho I'm wondering why he didn't mention that Kelsey wasn't born alone? Also in my opinion Nicole requires his blood, I think in order to be apart of his life and close to him should require his blood not only does it make them better, the best and strongest versions of themselves, he seems to be able to learn some of those skills once bonded, but also it keeps close secrets from getting out from being compelled. But she's dedicated herself to him before she even met him, that alone deserves his blood.

Allen Ferriola

I will say I am very disappointed by the start of this chapter! We've been waiting for it for a while now for it to not even happen. He was supposed to breed Rachael, instead he gives it to Avry and Michelle, Rachael begs him for it yet again at his house, he makes her wait, then the poor girl doesn't even actually get any real penetration. I didn't realize you were going to turn it all into a big game with those 2, I thought they both wanted her pregnant more than anything in the world, then he fails to even remotely try, hell he could have pulled out of Laura right at the end and at least stuck it in enough to finish in her..... Man what happened to not stopping screwing her until he was 100% sure she was pregnant.... Anyways there's my rant, back to reading.

Alice Duffield

She’d be a good bodyguard.

Christopher Miller

Sorry for the late comment, I was under the weather for much of the week and playing catch up at work for the rest. I really like where this is going with Nicole, Rachel and Kelsey all being members of a long-lost family meeting up for the first time.

Jonathan Depenau

I can't help but wonder if interesting things may happen when all three af Kai's (including him) experiments meet up together....good chapter, looking forward to all the various meetings in the next.....

Salsa and Chips

This isn’t a threat. It’s a promise. I love this story and want to see it continue and grow but I hate authors that kill off loved characters just to drive the story somewhere

Salsa and Chips

If you kill off any of the girls, I’ll unsub and delete Patreon permanently

The Archer

I am starting to think Raegan his the third experiment.

Moi465

I hadn't read that far yet, so you did.

Pedro Comenda

Especially considering she used to be a werewolf before her transformation into hellhound.

Pedro Comenda

Natalie has become his Luna. It’s the theory that makes sense in supernatural shifter culture.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Which character did you forget?

Author Kaizer Wolf

Is this better? ...to check my message from Kelsey, recalling that I had previously thanked her...

Moi465

"Kelsey, knowing I'd", it's formatted weird.

David Russo

This was the first chapter where I had to re read a name a couple of times to remember who she was. Going to have to start writing them down!! Haha really enjoying the story’s direction

The Archer

The situation with Natalie could possibly drive a wedge with Serenity, Gabriella and Avery feeling left out.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Actually, maybe I should change it to 'second time' and then just leave the clarification that it was more than with Claire.

Author Kaizer Wolf

I actually bring that up a handful of paragraphs past that point: "The fullest I’d ever stuffed anyone, even Claire." Claire was a lot, but not 'an hour-worth' amount.