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Combat Healer Ch. 69
🕑 Added 2024-12-13 16:37:25 +0000 UTCDecember 13, 2024
NOTE: Posting a bit early. This is yet another LONG chapter (basically TWICE as long as a normal chapter). Hope you enjoy!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
1. What did you think of Lyla's section? Any anticipation of the plans I have for this developing side-story?
2. Thoughts on Allister's section? What do you think is up with Wren? What do you think about Val's kinks? Anything else about the other characters? (Such as Remi, Jasmine/Val, etc.)
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Comments
Snappy Jo McGillicutty
And the MC has STILL not consummated his marriage to Val. WTF?
William L
As far as Val's kink, I honestly don't like it. You seem to be making her a facsimile of Avery in IDH: the Mom having sex with my boyfriend/ finance kink, the excessively long drawn out before sex period while adding way to many other sex partners [almost in seeming punishment], and largely sidelining their characters [Val & Avery] even though they ostensibly have much deeper/ longer term connections than most others.It just seems that both Val and Avery have are being mistreated overall, and their kinks just play into that perception.
Trav
You are really amping up this burn for Val!
Alice Duffield
I was thinking she was somehow setting up Ali to put a monster core in Mel. Like somehow Wren was able to prepare his body to ejaculate one and thus save Mel from the Oni.
The Archer
My money is the Beatrix.
Pedro Comenda
Just finished reading this chapter and I think you might be right. And I can think of two possibilities of by whom.
The Archer
I get the impression that Wren is being controlled/influenced by an outside force.
