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🕑 Added 2025-05-16 18:15:01 +0000 UTC

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Sky Pheonix

Yup

Andrew Houghton

Well that is different Thor on earth for winter soldier .

Sky Pheonix

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

Gabriel Harris

I think this was a great chapter! But I feel like Harry is going to end up biting off more than he can chew when it comes to ebony maw, thanos’s vast armies, and indeed their first actual meeting/fight. I foresee it being very brutal and bloody. I loved the experience with him being a respected ally and guest of Asgard. It’s refreshing and very well written. I felt a deep sadness with Ron and hermione meeting Harry in this life. With no memory of him yet their souls seemed to resonate with each other. And Harry saying to them in response to being asked if they knew him or had met before and he says “not in this lifetime” … it was so bittersweet and I could see how much he misses his two best friends. Again very well written. I think a way for Odin to remain as powerful as can be in his advanced age is needed. I wouldn’t write him off/kill him/de-power him, etc. Not saying you’d do that I’m just voicing my thoughts and opinions. Since you have a willing Loki who will be closely taught how to rule Asgard by Odin and Frigga as well. And he learns to be very responsible and fair as he should be. It is an interesting take on Loki’s character. And very interesting I think. This looming sense of doom or fate, coupled with the fact that eventually Asgard will go to war against Thanos is great. I hope you’ll find a way to still give Thor Stormbreaker. And I have an idea on Hela… considering Frigga is alive and the situation is drastically different. And the massive threat Thanos poses with his terrible armies... I feel having Odin bringing Hela back into the fold is necessary. And with frigga and Loki’s aid convincing her to try and forgive her father for what he has done to her by her banishment. And that he forgives her slaughter of the Valkyrie’s because he thought she was lost to him. And he regrets not having been a much better father to her instead of making her into a weapon. Her limited time on screen doesn’t fully express her character tbh. And I can’t help but feel that deep down all she ever wanted was acknowledgement and respect from Odin. But his mishandling and horrible parenting of his eldest child ruined her in a way… If Loki can be redeemed and brought back to be an ally of Asgard. I don’t see why Hela can’t either. And if Frigga isn’t her mother, I’d like to know who is and what happened to her… perhaps she died or… Thanos killed her? Just a thought and a bunch of suggestions. I love your story so far. :)


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