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🕑 Added 2025-08-25 18:15:01 +0000 UTC

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Andrew Houghton

They are right harry is a warrior able to kill and yet doesn't. He is been stupid idiot and really needs to step up and take charge as the avengers are finished maybe even shield.

Sky Pheonix

Different magic, I got you. Give me two chapters. 119 will have a more varied magical fight scene. It's not that Harry doesn't know more magic but he hasn't had the need to use it. If you think about it, the team as a whole hasn't had a loss since the helicarrier fight scene even that was a temporary crisis that got solved once Harry got his head sorted out. The Avengers lost this battle becuase they didn't have a challenge. Even Loki's army was an easy fight. Post Frigga training, Harry got challenged only once in the fight against Malakeith's right hand man. Hence Harry underestimated Wanda and Pitero. And as a result Harry lost. (Plus, I had a cool idea for the next chapter. And I needed a reason for it. Wanda being the catalyst allowed me to a) execute the idea & b) have Harry have some character flaws ie not taking this fight seriously.)

Sky Pheonix

Soooooo, the reason why Harry lost is because I had this super cool idea in my head for the next chapter (Harry's nightmare) and the chapter after that (the hulkbuster scene). And the idea was too good to pass. (That's the selfish writer explanation) The more logical explanation is, the team got complacent with their wins and as such Ultron's initial plan worked. But, like you said. Its going to be a different reaction to the loss.

Nick Pierce

Great writing as usual, but I was really hoping for more canon divergence. It really feels like Harry does nothing in this chapter. If the outcome is the same with or without him, what's the point? I know the Ultron arc is important for the Avengers as a team, but there are ways for them to experience a crisis of their own making without following the script every step of the way. That worked very well for the early stages of this crossover, but now the characters have all known and been influenced by Harry for years. I hope that will lead to different behaviors and outcomes as the story progresses.

Woolleymammoth

1. You have kept Harry’s magic to what he learned/heard from Hogwarts. Yet you sent him to Asgard. The only point of that seemed to make his magic reserves bigger. And give him a wand and sword. If he was really Frigga’s apprentice, he would have been learning magic that was rooted in Norse. But everything you keep having him do is protegos, bombardas and ventus. 2. I hope you are showing a more powerful Wanda with early access to her chaos magic. Cause in the avenger movie she was nowhere powerful or skilled enough to take on Harry. Also, Harry is way more experienced in magic/mental arts. He was able to do that stuff for Loki. His mental prowess should not have allowed her to do anything. Also, pietro might be fast, but it’s pathetic he didn’t have any countermeasures when he already knew about his ability and he is a highly trained military operative, meaning he is trained in tactics and plans.


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