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CMYK lady cast (not final, but in colour)
🕑 Added 2018-09-30 20:10:00 +0000 UTC ... so I've been working on this too.As I mentioned in the last post, I'm super happy with the way Kallie (the one in the centre) and now Renรฉe are looking. I've given Jasmine redder hair, green eyes and freckles, rather than her old siamese cat look. Not 100% committed to it yet though- she's still missing something.
As much as I'm a sucker for freckles, I just don't think they work. And the auburn hair thing isn't really working for me either.
You might have noticed that there's another three characters in the picture as well- from left to right, they'll be not-Miyu, not-Kat and not-Fay. I think of all of them, not-Fay's design is the one I like the most, since it's pretty obvious from looking at her that she's a nerdy engineer type, which is exactly what I wanted. But not-Miyu and not-Kat... well, that's not so easy.
Not-Miyu is meant to be a bit of a brawler, while not-Kat is meant to be more of a smuggler, rogueish sort of character.
If you guys have any ideas/thoughts on names or changes for those three, my ears are open!
Comments
KodiakMight
I'm definitely happy with the larger breasts on Renee, but I agree something is missing from Jasmine. I'd say fiddle with hair colors until you find one that works. I definitely think the eye color is the right choice for her though. Simply put, I adore Not-Fay. She's got the three qualities I like most in a girl: Nerdy, a tad tomboyish, and fit (those abs!). Please don't change a thing about her, or I will literally cry. Not-Miyu seems a bit off, though I think that may be in part to the recent work you did on Master Tigress for the WotM. A different species might be in order. Perhaps a liger? Not-Katt's a tricky one.The version you have now is okay, but it doesn't really sing to me. A rabbit is fine, but I think a different species is in order, perhaps even something reptillian. All in all, you've got some fantastic work here, Yawg, but it's definitely worth taking your time fine tuning them until you're absolutely satisfied with the results.
Roshiyu
Not-Miyu... Hmm... Well, if your not happy with her due to the look being far too drastic, you could make her a Bobcat? Brings her closer to the source material, but still different. As for Not-Kat, well, why not have a mouse/rat as your default rogue? ;P As for Not-Jenny.... To be honest, she pretty much looks like Jenny with hair dye. Maybe a light grey coat to better differentiate from the source material?
