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Book 3 - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2022-11-14 07:58:32 +0000 UTC

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Irakli Jishkariani

That .. expanded my mind 😀😀😀. Last two chapters are really something. End of the book 1 and start of book 2. Here I was getting comfortable following main characters, enjoying narrow focus on their progress. Then i take my sight off them and look at the world and WTF!!! That's my reaction 😀😀😀😀. Guy accidentally causing black hole (seriously what the hell was he trying to do to the army 😀😀, suck them inside themselves??! 😀😀😀), empire starting hunt in sovereign cities where sloane is going, some people discovering fundamental part of magic (ohh that's so delicious!! I like those worldbuilding part the most). Now I think where all this puts sloane into and I feel uncertain. And that's good. Its good that main character is not invincible because of some "magic" or heroic willpower or power of friendship or whatever 😀😀😀. Great chapters. You really know how to set the stage 😀😀😀


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