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Manabound - Resilience - Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2023-09-18 13:05:45 +0000 UTC

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Oxylus

It's part of the reason the worlds are so connected. That and I really didn't want to come up something new for every little thing.

Fortunis

Interesting. The Dragon is gonna be a hand full. She's going to need to teach her how to hunt and do magic. And, im just guessing here, but if She's like typical fantasy Dragons she's going to get much smarter very fast. It'll be fun to see how Gwyn handles her Dragon carting off some farmers cow or horse to munch on 😆 that brings me to another thing. Isn't it super weird this world has the same produce and animals as Earth? Chickens? Strawberries? Stuff like that? Unless it got shifted in The Flash as well as everything else and I missed the mention of it?

Oxylus

Which part do you mean? Calista jumping up? If so, that entire discussion with Roslyn was a last minute add. I'll try and flesh it out a bit in the next pass.

BelligerentGnu

Oh come on, the "we're about to meaningfully advance our relationship when something interrupts and the moment is lost" trope, Oxylus? That's hacky television writing and it's beneath you, you're better than that. Particularly when everything else about their coming-of-age crushing feels so beautifully organic. The characters you've written have reached a point of development, let them have it.


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