Knn
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So did it improve? :D (updated)
🕑 Added 2023-02-15 05:04:00 +0000 UTCHey guys fixed somethings and end up coloring it lol
hope u like it and if u have any advise feel totally free to tell me :D
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thanks for your suggestions i updated the pic so it could be more understandable :D
Comments
TheKipiDragon
Just the touch of adding the photo of the friend on the sac improves it a lot! Also the colours do make it way better as well, allowing to differenciate the characters as well! Really good job ^^
phantasm
The finished photo on the cumbag alone is a huge improvement >:) It took a couple minutes to get that the second panel isn't a direct continuation of the first. His son (unsurprisingly) looks a lot like him. Maybe a small 'Meanwhile' text box on the second panel.
rokie38
Very good colors Lots of brighter tones used
Diesel Bull
Huge improvement! It's hard to make this any more perfect, I just hope to see more of these two in the future!
Yeetus86
This is amazing! I hope to see you make some comics sometime! Also good fix on the texts to make the story more clear
GreyGaymer - Eli
Awesome work!! Now the son needs to eat one of Ozono's work buds! It's only fair
AwakenStar
I love it x3
Beta
Then I say like father like son
kunn
...that's his son xD
Beta
Seeing him with dad glasses is so cute
