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AnimeCon Harem Bonus: Chrissy-Cat Creations

🕑 Added 2018-01-22 06:26:34 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

I can see Foxy trying all sorts of things to try to entice, trick or bamboozle Brian's gals (particularly Stephanie because he's not a real fan of violence, he only plays one for the crowd). But as I said above, while he certainly has bad intentions and could be a threat with real power, he seems more like a Team Rocket sort than a demonic wizard (for example). And Mary getting sucked into an evil harem risks her falling down a pit in real time like the one that Kelly is trying to escape.

FortySixtyFour

Picture instead an ongoing narrative of side-stories where they meet Foxy again later, but this time he has ANOTHER girl with him besides Mary, the makings of another harem altogether... a DARK harem to oppose Brian's group. Or Foxy trying to then poach one of Brian's (probably Stephanie) away. Okay, I'll admit... these aren't GOOD ideas, per se, but they do feel very ANIME.

jmundt33a

Some good fun, and completely clean of grammar problems that I could see. I'm not sure about Mary. There are hints she needs the help, support and companionship that the group might offer. She's definitely looking for something like the passion they have and is unlikely to find it elsewhere, but her intro has done her no favors. And where Brian's ex has an eagerly anticipated comeuppance on the horizon somewhere, Mary's current place in Brian's orbit means that her inclusion in the harem could raise all sorts of thorny issues. However, if I'm being honest, any concern I had over Mark's possible injury or consternation died after what his last verbal exchange with his sister.


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