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Bonus Content Integration?

🕑 Added 2018-09-06 04:06:14 +0000 UTC

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FortySixtyFour

My issues with integration aren't with continuity, they're with the grade of material. The bonus content isn't up to my standard of writing for main chapters, and sorting out issues like head-hopping alone will involve a fair amount of revision and rethinking.

jmundt33a

I'd probably call this the "Integrate eventually" pile. You're going to want to integrate because you want incidents particularly from the Fet Panel and Mana included in the story to keep the character development flowing. But the sequence of events (particularly in Chapter 5 where I assume a couple of these side chapters happen) will have to be crystal clear. For instance, does the Mary chapter take place before or after Steph's near-assault? If it happens before, why is Brian back? If it happens after, what is he doing there now. Remember, Chapter 5 is only the second day of the Con, in the aftermath of the Truth or Dare game. So, it would seem that MtM would take place here.

Jedi Khan

I'm pretty sure you know my stance from previous comments, Forty. Integrate. Even if you don't do it for the Patron releases, you'll probably end up doing it when you eventually decide to publish in book format. Best do it now and have it all sorted out ahead of time rather than wait.


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