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AnimeCon Harem Bonus: Invitations and Promises

🕑 Added 2018-10-09 19:39:10 +0000 UTC

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FortySixtyFour

I think it was important to show that not everything's just going to conveniently bend its way to his will. Overcoming challenges and growing is also a way to establish him as an antagonist.

FortySixtyFour

Thank you! I'm weighing my options, do I want to have a more satisfying conclusion for this specific chapter, or do I want to leave more room for a follow-up chapter rather than squeezing events into this one.

Zhilbar

Was kind of disappointed to see the wind getting taken out of Foxy's sails, it makes him a less relevant baddie- but then I was thinking that this isnt Fletcher's first rodeo, and that he'd quite possibly been in a similar situation beforehand without being able to prevent it. Choosing between increased villain-weight or a story world with even side characters are decidedly competent; I'm torn. Kinda glad it's not my choice, right now.

Tosk

The rapid perspective changes were pretty easy to follow. You did a good job of quickly establishing who's eyes we are looking out of which makes it much easier. Looking forward to the finale


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