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Bad End in Proofreading
🕑 Added 2018-12-10 21:01:08 +0000 UTCLike Opportunity Struck, I'm now pushing Bad End into the proofreading phase. There are a lot of sections I can touch up and expand upon, but for now I'm going to enable everyone to share their thoughts and comments on the Doc itself as they please.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p8ck6q8Rxxk6v7l8zzNEv3tYhvMsBIAh2ZlbNuViITo/edit?usp=sharing
I don't expect any huge changes, except possibly moving the Kelly's first meeting with her sister from Bad End to Opportunity Struck. I'd also like to expand on that scene in general as the characters aren't as fleshed out as I'd like, but there's a lot on my plate this season.
I'm also toying with the idea of starting work on Chapter 7, but just about every single aspect of that chapter includes / involves massive spoilers as we reach the story climax, and I don't want to ruin anything for anyone. Might start posting teasers for it in the new year. Maybe an early Christmas teaser? Not sure yet.
Comments
Sebas Tian
I want the climax ma man. A d I will continue to pay to get it xD
HornsOfTheseus
Also, in terms of editing, the part where Kelly says “Why did she persist in thinking of it as Brian’s” might be stronger if she explicitly thought of it as Brian’s earlier in the paragraph.
HornsOfTheseus
Chapter 7 teasers would be great. The scene I am looking forward to the most is Emily finding out Brian wasn’t kidding about having girls with him.
Malcolm Tent
I dont know about everyone else but I read the story through teasers exclusively pretty much, so spoilers arent really an issue lol.
