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After AnimeCon: Farewells pt 2

🕑 Added 2024-09-27 17:53:14 +0000 UTC

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Kirrocen

Man, people up here planning their hopes and dreams and here I am staring at Stephanie bringing up Cactussy. Sir.

Joshua Cole

I think a little comedic trouble would be good. Nothing too big or heavy. Something very low stakes.

Stephen Weinberg

Yes! What you said! I want to just see them having fun for a little while!

Jeanie6754

Thanks for the update. Have a great day. Hope you are enjoying yourself 😺

mhaj58

Farewells is not a good fit for this. Feels like a final chapter rather than the midpoint between Animecon and Renfaire. Stephanie leaving is temporary and I doubt Rebecca or Emily will be too far away. A future viewing of Kelly might be a good way to see what will happen with the group as they prepare for Renfaire

Peter Henrichsen

No trouble sounds great, but the "can I grab a picture" sounds like it could turn into trouble if the wrong person sees

Cliff

Agree on the end on a high point with the main characters. I'm sure you'll want to create some kind of cliffhanger for the next book, but if it could not impinge on their happiness, I think that would be good. :-)

AzureXIII

I'm really loving these chapters and how they are fleshing out thus relationship. I really enjoy seeing how the group acts all together along with how they act when they are divided up.

Khuri

You....not giving us angst and drama at every turn?? Who TF are you and what have you done with 40???

Zaralith

Comfy vibes are nice, maybe only tension would be someone trying to drag Brian to the bathroom for a "snack"

FortySixtyFour

O_O

Toodles McGhee

So, you're NOT planning on having Rebecca declare that being in limbo is a cruel punishment that is the opposite of the reward she deserves, and demand that Brian seal the deal right here right now? Or having a bunch of locals happen in after shift end, who turn out to be Masters looking to gain prestige? Or have a Future Kelly sending stating that now the timelines are all reapportioned, they have new advice to have Christine sip a drop of boood from each, to seal her fractured self to each of them, restore her blood powers, but share the ability to deny the bloodlust to all of them? I gotta wait TWO chapters for all that??

Zach

It feels like Emily is really acting up here, something about complaining that the small town bar isn't trashy enough while inside the bar makes me real uncomfortable mixed in wirh everything else. Then again, the place doesn't even have frozen fries or onion rings or mozz sticks to throw in the frier or just bags of pretzels or nuts. My favorite dives have a pizza oven and a freezer full of pizzas too.


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